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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you definenitly have my attention good first chapter keep up the good work and update soon
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you definenitly have my attention good first chapter keep up the good work and update soon
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'd love to see you continue on this one, simply for the last lines alone. A Sasuke who gloats over a possible edge instead of immediately turning into so much marshmallow goo? *happy sigh* And I like the idea that Kakashi spends a good bit of time observing his team. Mmm, sneaky Kakashi. So here's to you getting past your writers block! Good luck!
-j
-j
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh! Please update soon!!! *gets down on knees and begs*
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto ! What this mysterious illness? It must be bad if you talk of death !
It is cancer ? Or AIDS (with the rape? and all) T-T
And bad Sasuke who want utilise that situatio n ! >.<
You should be working on Return of the Lost right now, then drop it !
It's a good beginning and it's promise some other great chapter !
Please Update soon !!! ^-^
It is cancer ? Or AIDS (with the rape? and all) T-T
And bad Sasuke who want utilise that situatio n ! >.<
You should be working on Return of the Lost right now, then drop it !
It's a good beginning and it's promise some other great chapter !
Please Update soon !!! ^-^
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I also remember reading this story on ff.net. Are you planning to change/improve the story or are you just going to leave it the same. It would be cool to have an alternate ending, different than the one you used before and maybe a sequel. Anyways I liked the story b4 and I still like it now so good job:)
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! Oh my god, you must update as soon as you can. I hope Sasuke isn't really that evil to use Naruto's illness against him. please update soon...very!