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for Changing Times

by KaiyoNoHime

person Church
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter i like it
person chem chick
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. I just read the first four chapters and I was really impressed. I like OOC stories because I agree with you, people grow up. Don't get me wrong, I like in character stories too, but sometimes I need something different, and this did the trick, I think. Well written, good grammar. It was easy and very enjoyable to read. I will be eagerly awaiting your next update!
person Church
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This Story=WOOTNESS!!!!! nice job i love it man cant wait to find out whats gonna happen Kakashi is so gonna kick sasukes ass
person piro
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excelent
person Jaques
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
soooo, [speculation-mode] sakura is the mother of setsuko, died at childbirth, something to do with the kyuubi, naruto blames himself, becomes all cold and stuff, gives child to kakashi because he thinks he cant take care of her himself [/speculation-mode] or something
i am prolly totally wrong, but who cares.
update soon \o/
person DancingKitsune
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just, Wow. This is a good fic, I really like it.....But poor Hinata. Eight kids? Jieze, I think Sasuke just MIGHT be trying to revive the whole dang clan in one lifetime...::feels bad fer Hinata:: But that's interesting, Kakashi raising Naruto's kid. But that kinda makes sense that Naruto would be all too busy with Hokage to be a father figure...Thou I kinda expected Iruka more than Kakashi. But then it kinda would be hard, him being a teacher and all....And she's only 5 and in her last year..? Or is she actually older and you just meant that Iruka had seen her in the last five years but she was older than a baby.....Mah whateva. I'm gonna stop asking questions now....lol

Please update soon!!!
~lina~
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
jaques i soo hope you're right
saku/naru is the best