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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Let's thanks the lord for and update. This story is HOT !!!! We... I need more of this. So, update soon, okay ! Oh and cool drawings by the way.
Luce
Luce
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's good so far, only one problem. In the sixth chapter you called Gai the Azure beast. Azure means sky-blue. Gai has always been the green beast.
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hyaaa~~~ finally a Gai/Kakashi, and a good one never the less. I thoroughly enjoyed your story, loved the characterization, it's not easy these days to find a fic with good sex scenes, and I mean REALLY good, AND decent plot. But you managed to do it, and you surpassed that by intergrating the two. Good job~~
I'm going to re-read the fic now and drool over sexy Kakashi... Actually, I can't imagine him without the mask, except with a pair of codfish lips or beaver teeth (due to naruto suggesting them in ... ep 110? I think...).
Looking forward to more of your stories.
luv
Nemmy
I'm going to re-read the fic now and drool over sexy Kakashi... Actually, I can't imagine him without the mask, except with a pair of codfish lips or beaver teeth (due to naruto suggesting them in ... ep 110? I think...).
Looking forward to more of your stories.
luv
Nemmy
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is fecking brilliant and has reawakened my urge to write my KakashiGai fic. XD
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more? pretty please?
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're really good at this. :)
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty obvious that you're alternating paragraphs, one author writing Kakashi's paragraphs and the other writing Gai's, because Kakashi's author has better grammar and proofreads more. Get Kakashi's author to proofread Gai's paragraphs and it'll be less jarringly noticeable that there are two different authors writing one paragraph at a time.
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know what ? I really love your story... The caracterisation is 100/100 canon (well, maybe exept for the 'I want to fuck my rival' part), but even in those part you make them act very credibily. This IS Kakashi, and this is undoubtly Gai :).
I see too few fic staring Gai and Kakashi (even just as rivals), so I think I will fall in love with you if you keep posting this really excellent story :D.
I see too few fic staring Gai and Kakashi (even just as rivals), so I think I will fall in love with you if you keep posting this really excellent story :D.
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"The desires of a man's body need to be sated in order to keep the flames of youth burning!"
Gai promptly got more than a few looks from those in the hallway, or ones that were peeking out of their rooms. A narrow-eyed blonde yelled at Gai from down the hall, standing in his doorway. "As long as you keep it in your room, go right ahead!"
Hahahhahahaha! I love that! This fic was really funny and pretty well-written! Kudos to you!
Gai promptly got more than a few looks from those in the hallway, or ones that were peeking out of their rooms. A narrow-eyed blonde yelled at Gai from down the hall, standing in his doorway. "As long as you keep it in your room, go right ahead!"
Hahahhahahaha! I love that! This fic was really funny and pretty well-written! Kudos to you!
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the first fic of this kind that i saw, and trust me, i look around a lot. you got fics hinting this with nothing happening and you got fics with nothing at all. but this fic had at least some lime and that was more than enough. this fic is good, has a solid and good plot, humor, and all yaoi goodness. and i have to tell ya, if you put some actual lemon in there, this fic will be off the chain (like it already is). plus, i kinda like this pairing since like i said, not much of this pairing going on.
well, i hope you update real soon ^_^V
well, i hope you update real soon ^_^V