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for Good Things Come in Threes

by blurredoasis

schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really well-written, and it's interesting to see the characters portrayed this way. I think they're all pretty in-character, and I definitely sympathize with Kiba's motivations.
You should really be proud of your skills as a writer, and of course, you should also be sure to continue this story. ^_~
person Gabo0
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, are you still posting some more of this story? I must say the shower scene was incredibly hot and Neji being sandwiched by this two is awesome. Please, do continue this story!
person hatorissexbitch
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good job. update soon!
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! PLEASE! PLEEEAAASSSEEE! I CAN'T WAIT! You stay in character wonderfully! This is a great threesome, good choice! You're very talented. Don't make me beg!!!
person bartleby
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you gonna write more on this?
person drivven
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Want more. pawleeeeeeze??

Really it was great and I absolutely love all three of them. I love how you write them too.
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY LOVED IT. I HOPE THERE IS MORE TO COME.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok the begining is what hooks you in you've got to continue this i want to know whos hurt and how it happened.i want to know whats going to happen to them. i mean in the begining it sounds like its kiba being carried by shikamaru but i could be wrong. just sounds that way kinda like it that way. but please update this story its really good.
person Gwyllion
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! Just want to let you know that it's my 3rd time re-reading this fic again and that I thoroughly enjoyed every chapter. I hope you will continue this beautiful piece. I would love to red further in Kiba and Neji's development. Verry hawt indeed....keep it up! :D
person Touya06
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!!

Those three together sounds really really hot...woah.

Too bad you haven't updated or provided a sequel, I would love to read more.

I like Kiba's sense of 'helping' people, lol. He seems to be really understanding of what people need. The scene you put about Kiba allowing Shikamaru free domain was nice.

I'd like to see more Shika/Kiba/Neji, not exactly in that order, but not always having a Neji on top either.

Hope you write more sometime.

-Touya06