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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is there going to be more? i love it so far! and i am aniouxly waiting for the rest.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I find that a key quality of a good writer is that through their words the reader shares in the emotions of the characters. So, if a character is angry the reader will feel angry, or scared, or embarrassed, or aroused -the list goes on. You are a good writer in my opinion. I don't know about everybody else, but when Kiba and Shikamaru barged in on Neji masturbating I could feel the embarrassment that he must have been feeling at that moment. Great work! I will definitely be looking for the next chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Ja ne
Unerasable Sin
P.S. I came across your "Artificial Lover" story months ago and I'm very happy that you posted more of your work. It's truly excellent.
Ja ne
Unerasable Sin
P.S. I came across your "Artificial Lover" story months ago and I'm very happy that you posted more of your work. It's truly excellent.
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update! I love your Kiba!! Chapt. 4 is great, but I wished you'd included more of the Kiba/Shika fun.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow... the part with neji masturbating in the shower is the single hottest thing i think i have ever read. *ever!* @_@ i wanna watch him do that!!!! i hope you're planning on adding to this one! if neji finds some solitude in which he may relieve his tension, i wanna see, ok? i don't even know when this was posted; it could be three years old for all i know. but some more neji masturbation would be wonderful. ^_^ thank you!!
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles*
I hope this story continues.. I love it.. ^^
I hope this story continues.. I love it.. ^^
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh gods I love this. I usually write long reviews about characterizations and such but for some reason this fic turned me on so much I can't really write a good review apart from please continue, please please please.
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh, this is getting very hot! Please tell you're gonna update! EM
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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah, I love this story already!
The pairing is so rare and it's really lucky for me that you write really well! I liked how you wrote Kiba the best, it's an interesting way to look at him.
Anyways, I hope you update soon! Keep it up!
The pairing is so rare and it's really lucky for me that you write really well! I liked how you wrote Kiba the best, it's an interesting way to look at him.
Anyways, I hope you update soon! Keep it up!
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June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. GOD! This is my OT3!!!!! How'd you know???? YOU MUST CONTINUE!!! *bows before holy one* PLEASE finish! This is already hilarious, and me, my pervy mind, and my sick sense of humor want to see the rest!!! *puppy eyes*
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THey better do it in the next chapter. some sex would be good :)