rate_review Reviews

Beautiful! The tension in it is sheer torture! I wanted so badly for them to make love. The way Haku remains hopeful is quite touching. What a dear!

>>; This made me cry damn it. Need more Haku.

Beautiful. It lacs a lemon, not for its story but simply because I like lemons so much.
It's perfect just the way it is, isn't it? XD
Um, yet another Zabuza/Haku you made me read. :P

~Horizont

Oh my...THAT WAS SO FRIGGIN' ADORABLE!!! *glittery eyes* NYAAAAAAAAA! I love it! Beautifully written! It was absolutely perfect. *hearts and sparkles* I have a gorgeous fan art of them...i wonder if you've seen it? I found it on a Japanese site...i wish i had link to it to give you! Actually there was two of them, one is of Zabuza (in black leather!!!) and he is caressing Haku's beautiful face...and there are pretty pink flowers...*fawns* The other is Haku snuggled up with Zabuza under a tree...and his white rabbit. Gah, my disription sucks...anyway, while i was reading through their 'tense embrase', i just kept seeing that picture in my head and it was like...*screaming fan girl-ness* So yeah, be proud of yourself. This was beautiful. And even, thank you for refraining from sex... I fear it would have cheapened it. *clapping* d(^-^)b