rate_review Reviews

its prtty rare for a genma story, ive seen..... but its an interesting concept for a story, very good! could yo email me whenever you update this fanfic? my email address is deannathx@comcast.net

wow this is so good! please udate this soon

Hi, I really like your story, I like how it uses the lesser known charaters of naruto as well as your own OC. I can't wait to find out what happens next in the story and his quest of freedom and revenge I hope genma will love him enough so he doesn't self destruct like sasuke. the clan you made sound cool except for the whole slave thing, but everyone has obstacles they must overcome right! And though I'm reviewing Genma's I just add I like your "coming of age" story as well and hope it will be updated soon, as well as any future stories you write. If you are posting stories, info, pics, etc. at a different site i would appreciate you forwarding the address.

yours sincerely
Bronwyn