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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story can't wait until the update please thank you
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't the finest idea why you stopped writing this but I really do hope you'll continue one day soon. Great story, nice detail, not too boring either, and rather informative too.
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry changed profile to TsukiRed
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi there!
wow, as soon as I read "plotful" in the summary, I knew I was in for a great story!
and it was great! very hot, too. you should put up a warning: "girls, you'd better sit on a towel"
are you ever going to update this? if so, would you be so kind so as to tell me by email? this story is really good, and deserves to be finished!
wow, as soon as I read "plotful" in the summary, I knew I was in for a great story!
and it was great! very hot, too. you should put up a warning: "girls, you'd better sit on a towel"
are you ever going to update this? if so, would you be so kind so as to tell me by email? this story is really good, and deserves to be finished!
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love ur story! it's fucking hot. not many do but i like kakanaru but without a whole bunch of fluffy goo goo
gag-me-with-a-spoon crap. you hit it perfectly! im glad you have kakashi x kyuubi on here i don't think ive seen that happen before, though, i have thought about it (=D) and how its naruto and kyuubi constatnly like, switching out or something as if 'they were takin turns bending over' -as i would put it xD. anyways i love it so far! plze continue real soon. something i also really like about your story is that ushally after rading a certain amout of constant sex scenes i'd ushally get bored and stop reading but i think the story made it perfect! youve dont what? about 5 sex sessions? and damn it i still wanna read more! =D well update soon! i can't wait till u do!
gag-me-with-a-spoon crap. you hit it perfectly! im glad you have kakashi x kyuubi on here i don't think ive seen that happen before, though, i have thought about it (=D) and how its naruto and kyuubi constatnly like, switching out or something as if 'they were takin turns bending over' -as i would put it xD. anyways i love it so far! plze continue real soon. something i also really like about your story is that ushally after rading a certain amout of constant sex scenes i'd ushally get bored and stop reading but i think the story made it perfect! youve dont what? about 5 sex sessions? and damn it i still wanna read more! =D well update soon! i can't wait till u do!
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
p.s. i hope you have another 1-3 chapters worth of kakanaru/kakakyuu sex but when they get back to konoha they better be sasunaru!! i bet pple have been asking for narusasu huh?... well...THEY BURN IN HELL! naruto's everbody's (well..everyone who's sane or...insane if you count me=D for this matter) favorite uke! GIVE ME SASUNARU OR GIVE ME EVERYONE WHO BJECTS SO I CAN BURN THEM IN MY HELLHOLE CALLED A MIND! MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
ahem.. *cough cough* sorry i only got about 5 minutes before the guys in white come back for me.. anyways great, lovly, sexy, hot, makes-me-drown-in-my-own-drool fic! update soon!
ahem.. *cough cough* sorry i only got about 5 minutes before the guys in white come back for me.. anyways great, lovly, sexy, hot, makes-me-drown-in-my-own-drool fic! update soon!
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waaaah! more more more more more!!! PLEASE!!!
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, WHOA. this is one of the only stories i think ive ever reviewed on aff.net, seeing as how most of them, even the ones i enjoy, are kinda crappy. and ive been reading fix here for years. <--i need less peverted hobbies ^^;;;;;; anyway, absolutely great!! i love the mix of embarrassing clinical and sexy intimacy--creates wonderful tension and anticipation!! #__# im seriously over-heated here. what a turn-on your adorable naruto is. i love that the set-up is with kakashi, whom i also love to death although inever read kakanaru--this is my first of that pairing. it's very logical and unromantic, and yet there's a caring and mutual respect there that makes it exciting and not anything like non-con or those stupid out-of-character fics. in fact, your naruto characterization is excellent!! not too dumb but pretty naive and uwaaa~~!! you know what i mean, that sound he's always making in the original jap anime? hahaa, it's great.
kakashi is less in character, but i can see how it's very hard to figure out how he would react to this kind of situation since he and naruto dont interact as much as naruto does with sasuke (my otp!!<3) or anyone, really. i actually like kakashi with guy--b/c as creepy as guy looks with his bushy brows, they have that whole rivalry/friends thing going on behind the scenes, tho i avoid kakagai fix b/c ppl tend to butcher that pairing. i mean, come on, have kakashi and iruka even talked once during the series?!?!?! not that i dont love iruka, it just doesnt seem remotely plausible....but i digress. to sum it up, your story rocks and is supa HAWT!!!! so please update as soon as you can. im hooked!! if you email me, ::sing-song cajoling voice:: i will draw you a piiiiiic~ture....i'm an art major; i can actually draw...::trying to tempt you into not abandonning this story:: pleeeeease? come be my friend, im a great pervy accomplice and i know a good sasunaru reccomendations site. xoxox
kakashi is less in character, but i can see how it's very hard to figure out how he would react to this kind of situation since he and naruto dont interact as much as naruto does with sasuke (my otp!!<3) or anyone, really. i actually like kakashi with guy--b/c as creepy as guy looks with his bushy brows, they have that whole rivalry/friends thing going on behind the scenes, tho i avoid kakagai fix b/c ppl tend to butcher that pairing. i mean, come on, have kakashi and iruka even talked once during the series?!?!?! not that i dont love iruka, it just doesnt seem remotely plausible....but i digress. to sum it up, your story rocks and is supa HAWT!!!! so please update as soon as you can. im hooked!! if you email me, ::sing-song cajoling voice:: i will draw you a piiiiiic~ture....i'm an art major; i can actually draw...::trying to tempt you into not abandonning this story:: pleeeeease? come be my friend, im a great pervy accomplice and i know a good sasunaru reccomendations site. xoxox
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dude, i just wrote a flattering yet honest, long-ass review, and it all got cut off after the first two lines, which in fact, almost seem to insult your fic. if the rest of the review shows up, you'll see i have nothing but love for you. ::sighs:: i dont wanna re type the whole damn thing....summary: i love the fic, naru characterization really really good, kakashi characterization not as in character, but given the situation, thats understandable. i like the pot, want more, please email me if you continue this at dikhotomi@gmail.com if u email me i will draw you a picture and im a college art major so i dont suck hard or anything so be tempted and contact me!!
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Smex rules!! I love this story; it's got a good plot going on. Keep up the juicy work and hope it maybe turns out to be a sasunaru one too. vi va la yaoi!