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for Coming of Age

by TsukiMorositey

person Ruka
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is such a hot story! Please update sooN!
person Stormraven
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Great sex scenes....*feels light-headed* I love your characterizations and a strong seme Kakashi always pleases. Nice, clean writing style, very enjoyable to read. Can hardly wait to see what comes next!
person Saske\'s Iris
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOhhhhh good stuff, I so agree with the whole Kakashi really doesn't get enough love with Naruto in non perv setting. I like the way you are writing the story it is enjoyable and hopefully we will get to see alittle Naru sasu in the future wink wink nudge nudge.. hehe
person Terry
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how you portray the Kyuubi. Very wild. Can't wait til the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... good chapter, but ya gotta work on the sentence structure a bit >< Alot of things ya said made little sense ^^;
person EscagirlUK
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Promise me you will *never* use the word 'fluffy' in reference to a penis *ever* again! And other than that great fic. Sasuke better be on bottom when they finally get together!
person Anon
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hee! This fic is great. You've got some interesting, varied sex, and it's tender without being all "we were forced to fuck, now we are in love" (although I have nothing against people having crushes on Naruto /bias) Dirty and sweet!
person blisblop
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolute hoot.Very nice.Funny too.Gentile raunch,gotta love it.
person Erika
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!?! Why the heck did he cut himself?? ohmant hat was GREAT and I like the idea that Kyuubi is finally giving Naruto a chance to enjoy himself and that Kakashi is being Nicer about it, Oh and let me guess Maybe Iruka would like to be the Boyfriend of out copy-nin? LOL...that was GREAT:D THANKS:d GOOD LUCK in School just started myself..SCARY!!! But oh well, beats the hell out of the summer sessions:D
person MeLaiya
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, You have got to hurry and update, your killing me here. I absolutely love this, im not a very avid k/n fan but i fucking love this. it is the absolute best i have ever read in this category. please hurry and update soon, im begging you PLEASE!!!!