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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Egh. The last part got me a bit queasy... I like the story a lot though. Looking forward to the next update. ^_^
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for Naruto, but I really like this fic. Please continue!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG...Poor Naruto Kyubbi is being extra dificult isn't he...oh man, that was GREAT!! and I like the fact that their is an actual reason behind the all the sex, oh man can't wait for the next chapter, and Kakashi was being to Sweet about it to, but damn Kyuubi he couldn't let Naruto's 1st time be as comfortable as possible could he, dang it! Cant' wait for the next chapter:D THANKS
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot! finally, at long last, someone write a KakaNaru fic again! Fabulous! And may I say, that lemon is kinda hot! Yum! lol. So do update more!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a GREAT beginning but man there is so few Kaka/Naru out there I´m glad someone is writing them:D can´t wait to see wha will happen next:D
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting so Kyuubi is going to let Naruto deal w/the 1st round..wonder how many rounds it´ll take to satisfy Kyubbi, GREAT chapter:D Thanks:D
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To be honest I reallt didn't think I'd like this story by it's summary. There are too many Naruto in heat stories and most poorly done.
However I had woken up extremely too early and couldn't go back to sleep. If fiction didn't entertain me maybe it could bore my back into slumber. However your story I discovered I actually liked. Rather well done. Most lemons are only that, with no plot and the sex being the only story. You kept well to the characters and even installed some foreshadowing to later relationships.
I really like this fic and hope you'll continue soon. Thank you for writing something worth reading.
However I had woken up extremely too early and couldn't go back to sleep. If fiction didn't entertain me maybe it could bore my back into slumber. However your story I discovered I actually liked. Rather well done. Most lemons are only that, with no plot and the sex being the only story. You kept well to the characters and even installed some foreshadowing to later relationships.
I really like this fic and hope you'll continue soon. Thank you for writing something worth reading.