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for The smell of blood

by Trollmia

person Hyday
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very well done. it was very very good. and for the most part it was gaara's character. the end was sweet too. i would like to see a cintinuation to this, a what happenes after, chapter.
person PriestessEternal
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! THAT WAS JUST GREAT THE MOST EXCELLENT ONE SHOT EVER AND I LOVE THE WAY YOU HAD HINATAS CHARACTER IT WAS COMPLETE PERFECTION PLEASE WRITE MANY MORE!
person renalanford
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow....thats all i can say call me weird but the blood just made it all the more erotic...and it goes well with gaara! ^_^ nice job love your gaara hina stories.
person Gaaras Psychotic Sex Machine.
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg i love Gaa/Hin stories, && even though it was a bit wierd, my love for gaara stands strong XDDDD
person nappyhead
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm, during her period? pretty icky indeed but great nonetheless
person cyzay
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! it's an icky idea at first, but at the same time its strangely exotic. the story part of it was a tad long, Gaara seamed a little bit... i dont know maybe too nice? but it didn't detract from enjoyin the story and it was well written - great job!
person the vampire Kor
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My first responce to this was: What the fuck?! But this kind of thing is what makes adultfanfiction.net awsome. I thought you did a great story, and I see no reason it should be only one-shot. Keep up le good work!
person Prrt
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmm, your writing style could use some refinements. but i like the idea of Gaara wanting Hinata.
person ShinkuNoTenshi
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Is this the ending? Please don't stop here!! This is a good story. I'd like it if you woud continue it.
person Unknown
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue please