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for Winning His Heart - Logical

by Karista

schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow.I Just Can't Wait What Happens. ^^
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Continue, please? There is a great deal of opportunity here, and you are a great writer to boot. Thanks for the review on Recurring by the way, Im trying. Anko seems so spiffy, but we barely get to see her. Its sad. Anyway... Kudos!
person hieiashke
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ano sa, where's chapter 2?
person randomperson with no life...
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update this soon!! this was really good...it definitely caught my eye...though i dont usually read Naruto with Hinata...i thought the summary was good so i had to check it out...so please update soon...this was really good and well written plus you got the personalities great...though i hate Sasuke with Naruto as long as in the end he is with Hinata then i'm happy...seeya...^_^
person nonny for Anonymous
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I like the setup so far; can't wait for your next installment. Keep it up... is there some sort of update list?

Cheers!

- nonny for Anonymous
person BT
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story so far. Personally I think you should do more then 2 chapters.
person Saico
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite a good beginning, but I doubt you can solve everything in only two chapters.
person blisblop
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is way good.Hinata is as sexy as a pillow in my mind,way too comfortable to compete with Sasuke but this isn't all about sex is it.You have your work cut out,thats for sure.Good luck, though talent alone might save the day in this case.Thanks.
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First things first : Thank you so much for taking up my challenge. When I first posted th challenge, I never actually expected someone to take up my offer. Also, I want to say that you write very well. I loved this chapter, and I'm looking forward to chapter 2.

Again, thank you very much for responding.

Sincerely,
ShadowSannin