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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shez likes this fanfic a lot, but wishes the chapters were longer, yes. Shez doesn't care what other coupling there are as long as there is lots of yummy Sasunaru-ness. ^^
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic so far!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!=)
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What are you planning to do to Naruto? I know: wait and read, but there was only two chapters. Please continue.
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uhh, not bad:D can´t wait to see the next chapter and they are all pretty much in charecter, well sasuke and naruto anyway^^ and another plus you are very good at english or have a good beta which ever it is, it makes the story even better than it already is:D Keep up the good work.
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story !
Sasuke's possessivness is so funny ! I can imagin Naruto
with all the hickeys ! Too bad that they are not uchihas symbol shaped !!! lol ^-^
for the pairing, please a NejixGaara and LeexSakura, Please ! *puppy eyes no jutsu*
Please update soon !!!
Sasuke's possessivness is so funny ! I can imagin Naruto
with all the hickeys ! Too bad that they are not uchihas symbol shaped !!! lol ^-^
for the pairing, please a NejixGaara and LeexSakura, Please ! *puppy eyes no jutsu*
Please update soon !!!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ShikaKiba would be cute ^^ I like that couple, but I don't see it often anywere.
And the fic.. It's great, hope you continue soon! And if I like ShikaKiba, I LOVE SasuNaru more than my life! *boogies*
And the fic.. It's great, hope you continue soon! And if I like ShikaKiba, I LOVE SasuNaru more than my life! *boogies*
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm a virgin writer too!! =D A virgin writer with four stories..-Sighs- It's thought but someone's got to do it. ^_^
I don't care how they get together!! This story is uber excellent and funny!! =D Please update!!! ^_^ Keep the main pairings SasuNaru!! <3
I don't care how they get together!! This story is uber excellent and funny!! =D Please update!!! ^_^ Keep the main pairings SasuNaru!! <3
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start. I would suggest you lengthen the chapters more. The second one was longer than the prequel (as it should be) but still only about 2-3 pages really. Your grammar and spelling is fantastic, so no complaints there although, and I might be wrong, but I think "chunin" is spelled "chuunin". I can't remember right now and am too lazy to look it up.
Anyway, keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of this.
Cheers
Anyway, keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of this.
Cheers
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG hahahahahahhahahahaha write morreeeeee wonderfull mmmm poor naru-chan ( as always -___- ) sasuke is crazy...no YOU is crazyyy moaahahahahahahahha first I thought naruto would have a Uchiha tato on his back 'cus he's sasukes pet ( or what we know call it *grins* )haha anyway mmmm shinokiba would be good and SakuIno moaaahahahahahahahahhahaha
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha Nice, i love it when Sasuke 'claims' Naruto, i always knew the boy was an exhibishinest! XD Very cute, but what with the Sasunaru for now thing? O.o Sasuke and Naruto belong to one another and Sasuke was born seme, you should keep it Sasunaru, anyways other couples i would like to see would be LeeSaku, NejiHinata, KakIru, ShinoKiba and ShikaChiou or InoSaku. anyways well done story, i really am looking forward to more.