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A prequal is good, but I want to see Sakura's reaction. I really don't like her, and as for another pairing, definitely Shika/?? I don't like Ino either. Good writing.

Alright, I read the reviews and Anonymous, if you don'tt want to read male/male maybe you should pay attention to the summ because it lists the pairing. Stop picking on someoone else's grammar, find something useful to say or don't say anything.

haha, adorable~! a possessive Sasuke can be so much fun sometimes. keep on updating!

Keep it coming! Ths is a great story. As for other pairings, I like them all. Can't wait to see how Sasuke announces his claim to everyone.

SWEEEEEEEEEET!!!
Nice fic, reeeeaaaly nice :) The idea of overly possessive Sasuke is intriguing!
Just don't make Naruto act like a pussy, ok?
I mean Sasuke likes him just because Naruto IS NOT a submissive wimp, right??
I like your sense of humour, too.
Update ASAP, I can't wait for more possessive bastard's advances :)

One thing about the kissing scene:

you said that his voice turned into a cresendo, but isn't that suppossed to be a decresenco?
because cresendo is soft to loud, and descresendo is loud to soft.

oh, and you do realize there's a male/male section here? it's there for a reason...

*snickers* Evil Uchiha! doesnt he know that trying to mark Naruto might present a challenge to his other suiters.

Great story! I love a possessive Sasuke ^^
It's just so funny seeing him all jealous and ruffled. The bit about him covering poor Naruto up in hickeys made me crack up. I really do hope you continue with this. It's very promising and I can't wait to see what Sasuke has in store for Naruto and the rest of Konoha in his new mission. As we all know the Uchiha can be quite obsessive when he is determined to do something *coughcough* kill Itachi *cough*. Anyway update soon. You're doing a fantastic job. I'll certainly be checking up on this little gem.

Oh, my. Now there is a twist.
I love your style, not to complicated with enough action and description to keep the minds eye focusing. Good portrayal of Naruto and Sasuke, in character and believable. I was intrigued by the summary, and I love this so far. I will keep up to see where it is going.
I haven't chosen any favorite pairings on this series, myself, but I love when people go someplace new with Kiba, or Neji cause they are so hard to read usually. If kept in character, the pairings are wonderful, except Neji/Hinata, that's just disturbing outside of AU. I hope you can capture Shino with the same accuracy you have depicted the characters so far. He's my favorite.

Oh gods I do want to know how they got together it got to be some story...