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for You Possessive Bastard!

by DogandPoo

person ~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

It's really good. I can't wait for the next installment. Please try not to take too long. I like how Sakura is pretending to like Saske, and the idea of the bet! Does everyone know? UPDATE!

luvs from
~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
person cibiboy
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really cool!!I loved it can't wait for the next chapters!!!!
person Tapio_Once
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story...you didn't happen to get inspired for this story by a certain doujinshi would you????
person Lyndsay-Marie
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I can't wait for your ext chapter!

~Lyndsay-Marie
person ranni
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute, cute, love it, write more! I command thee to get cracking. Jk. No seriously i want to see more chapters!!! Please
person nocturne
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh. I love this. ^.^ possessive sasuke just rocks.

HE RULES MY TOOL!

er...sorry. --;
person Ladyfox
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY! It's so funny, some how I aways see Sasuke so possessive. I would like to keep up with this story, so could you let me know by email me when you up date? I would really like it, If not ok I will just have to try and keep up. Happy writing!
person bunnicle
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, that was just wonderful! I cannot wait for the next chapter. I must say, i was kinda suprised when it was Iruka that gave Sasuke the collar. I forgot he was a prankster too...
person Youkai Dreams
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello There!
Well, still a lot od grammatical, and punctuation mistakes in here, lol. The contents were fine, I suppose. It just seemed like more of a filler chapter...but didn't you say something like that in the author's notes? Lol.
-Youkai Dreams

PS- Sure, I'll email you the mistakes, or talk to you on messenger...or something. One mistake I repeatedly keep seeing is the format of your quotes, but I'll tell you about that later. Lol, I'm just REALLY good at LA, so nothing much gets by me.