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for You Possessive Bastard!

by DogandPoo

person RinChan
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. Its so funny how possesive Sasuke is. ^_^
person Saske\'s iris
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha baa chan and shizune are hilarious!!! omg and that bet on the boys what a hoot. this was a neat chapter to add I like your sense of humor! oh oh and i nearly rolled out of the chair laughing when found out Ikura was the one who gave sasuke the collar...Hope your job is goin well and will wait as patiently as a bored college student can for an update. :)

I place bets on sasuke breaking first, since that stick up his ass will probably drive him to show off that possesive nature when someone gives naruto an appraising look (snicker) i wouldn't put it past sakura she seems like the type that would go all out to win a bet ;)
person Crimson_Revenge
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaay, you updated finally!! Although I want more SasuNaru... That would make me happy...! Anyway. Update soon!!
person Twistedneko
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOO! You updated! Good job girl! You rock! Have you noticed that I'm just saying random complements because I dont have my thoughts organized?! Well, you rawk...out loud!

Ahh...I appreciate my bday. My birthday is October 9th. (Day before Naru-chan! XD I'm so pressed about it.)
person Sukara
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Short but funny. Oh-ho-ho, I wonder what Sasuke has planned. xD Keep up the good work. =3
person dyingstar-elipsis
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WA! CUTE! I'm sure Naruto would love this bday present! haha, anw, going back to Sasuke n Naruto soon? I almost wish that Gaara would appear n make Sasuke even more jealous ^_^
person mimi
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. very interesting, I like how you describethe all grown up Naruto- evil grin ^-^. I intend to keep reading, keep up the great work.
person oohh eye candy
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice sasuke character...if he's not trying to kill naru-chan he's possessing him...if yu need any more ideas do a search for (zettai-hentai) on the web it has several sas/nar doji that yu can direct download or bit-torrent, they also have a few kaka/iru doji as well... good luck..ja
person yurathewicked
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! an update! *drools* i really like this story. I especially love Shizune in this chapter- great characterization on her part. um- please update soon? (no rush... no rush... i know how it feels to have people hounding you) this chapter seemed pretty short, but i think it was good to see the reactions of the other characters to naruto and sasuke's relationship. i like how you have them respond- sakura especially. i hate it when authors paint her into that 'crazy jealous and angry' role.

also, i don't remember if i commented on the last chapter or not, but great job on your first lemon. that scene was hot! it definitely wasn't amateur in any sense of the word.
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, im just wondering when you will update your story? Or is it already finished? I hope you won't end it yet because it such a funny, heartwarming and good story...:) I hope that you would write the prequel to it soon. God Bless you always...:)