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*grins* Works for me, and Go Iruka! Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next update. Ja!

OMFG!!! This is soo hilarious...I like it you should update soon...I like the whole Sasuke Possessive idea i can totally see it...Update soon!!

Ehehe! Aw. Update! +_+!

PLEASE UPDATE!!!! this is amazing and I acn't wait for the next chapter

Konnichiwa!
I kind of like this story, although the boat load of mistakes is beginning to get on my nerves, lol. I don't now, I'm an ace at English class, so maybe I'm catching the mistakes that you and your editor are missing. Maybe you should consider revising? Or I'd be happy to re-revise it for you, if you want. Well, I suppose that's kind of rude, huh? Gomen.

I like the plot so far, it's new (I think), although I will admit, it's not the best thing I've ever read. Sorry, I have this thing with being blunt and rude, although I'm trying not to. Telling the truth comes a bit too nauturally for me. I know- I'll get it checked out =D.

As for the lemon, not the worst thing I've ever seen, not the best. Seeing as that was your first time writing a lemon, and it at least made sense, and managed to hold entrance, I'd say you'r pretty good! Hrm, I'm a pervy so I like graphic stuff myself. Can you write a graphic lemon in here? Lol

Just to let you know, I don't review every chapter unless I find something in particular I want to comment about, be it good or bad. Lol, what's the point in saying "I like it" in some way, shape, or form for every chapter? I'm sure you'd rather be reading reviews from other people than just me, lol.

Well, I'm off for now, but I shall keep watch for this story. Don't expect another review until at least chapter ten, unless it is going to be a short story. Then I'll just review on the last chapter =D.

Ja
-Youkai Dreams

PS- I might even remember to log in the next time I review @_@. Also, if you take a long time to review, I may forget I'm reading this story. I don't have the best memory in the world...

Aawww~!!! That was soooooooo KAWAII!!! I loved it!!! ^___^ Very well written lemon, and an adorable resolution at the end. Keep up the good work!!!

TOOOO CUTE HOPE TO SEE MORE!

poor Naru-chan... ^____^ Hiding his relationship from the village while sending dozens of Kage Bunshins with uchiwa fans all over the pajamas and collar XD But then again, the reason of Sasuke's possessiveness is realistic --we're talking about the drama/angst-queen Sasuke here-- ^___^ *hugs Sasuke plushie tighter* Anyhow, now that Naruto seems determined to go with Sasuke's idea of announcing their relationship, what would happen next? Would Gaara still come storming to Konoha about the rumors? Or would the stupid Sakura would throw a hissy fit? Or would Hinata suddenly use her newly-developed jutsu [in episode 151] against Sasuke? ^^;; please update soon!! :D I'm really curious about what's going to happen next... *grins* Write more lemons; this one is pretty good!!! =]

Keep up the good work!!! :)

>>Seto's Darkness<<

Omg! What's Naruto gonna do huh? I can't wait to read more. The whole Collar thing was really cute..Aha And I laughed out loud when it described what he was wearing..Rofl..Sily pants with the Uchiha symbol ALL over them! XD ^__^;;

Eeeee! This is so great. Update soon!!! :OOO

Wow, that last chapater was actually very good. It really went somewhere, I liked that. Keep up the good work. I am very impressed.