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for You Possessive Bastard!

by DogandPoo

person Anon
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wah...you finally updated...i've been waiting so long....hehe..is Sasuke going to tell? Quick do your next chappie.
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wah...you finally updated...i've been waiting so long....hehe..is Sasuke going to tell? Quick do your next chappie.
person Crimson_Revenge
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... Awesome chapter!! I love Hinata, she's sooo adorable!!! Update soon!!
person insert_fetchy_name_here
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG. U hafta. Update. SOON!!!!! *spazzes* this is so hilarious and cute!!!! xD
person vashta
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chap, please let him tell her!!! I really don't like her. I think she is acting so weird either because she slept with Lee, or she knows Sas is with someone but not who. I would like a little suspense when the villagers find out, I think your writing and grammar are very profeesional. I like a good story that flows and you are accomplishing that, is it all going to be humor?
person Blackrose451
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
isn't Sakura always acting weird around Sasuke? hehehehe he bit Naruto. Poor Naruto, I would if i was Naruto kick Sasuke's ass lover or not i would! But sadly I'm not his lover... Great chapter! Can't wait for the rest!
person xmiso
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! update soon or else i'll shave ur hair off and feed it to my pitbull.
person Demon
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is amazing!!!!
person w,e
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lolz~ tats cute xD
person ky0kichi
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rofl! Omg. I love it. You have to update soon!!! I need to know what happens. I must say, the way you desribed how Naruto grew up was great, I loved the mental image it gave me..I mean most of the time they make him sound too tall or too muscular or some crap..But you did great! ^___^ And the whole punching Neji in the face thing..That's..Funny. XD Rofl

Ohhh! And Naruto would look HAWT in uchiha clothes!! Weeeeeeee! ^_^ Go naruto!

All we need now is more possessive sasuke maybe some fangirl bashing and some potential gropeage! Hehehe I can't wait for the next chapter, so don't be a strager!

update soon onegai!l