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person -

schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM

I like! please continue ^^

person blisblop

schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Are you still there?

person Blonde_puppy_Joey

schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM

oO UPDATE DAMNIT! *is waiting for update*

person blisblop

schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

No its not the transition that is rough the second paragraph in the Sasuke/Naruto part is missing words,it is hard to understand,it is not boring by the way,at all.Please update soon!Big eyes.

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