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by MLL

schedule August 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a beautiful story and I just bawled.
person Nejislady
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was such a surprise!!! T___T I loved it!! I feel so sad for Sasuke but differently for Naruto. That was so good.
person UchihaXBloodXBoils
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Was Sasuke like.. a ghost or something.. You realise how much this made me cry.. I had tears pouring down my face the WHOLE time I was reading it... I am writing a story now with a similar concept.. But This was really good.. very emotional.. very sad.
person Rosebud
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that was so sad!
I didn't expect that ending either.
I want to cry...

Beautifully written though.
person Misty Duvall
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great!!! though sad as well keep up the good work :)
person my love for you
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I'm crying, thats was so good, so twisted. I wow I don't know what I should really be saying. That was so amazing. Your writing was so good. Some of the grammer was a little messed up, but you put so much feeling into it. I want to thank you. It was good, no it was great, I loved it.
person Mamoru
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Parallel universes? It was... touching. I'm feeling really weird right now... must be fluff abstinence.
Really good writing it took me some five minutes to move after I was done reading.
person lock
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ow i'm sorry to post a wrong review on freely given! hehe because i reviewd to your 3stories in one day(in the same hour)so it mess-up in my brain.. hehe til next time (i'm really sorry!)
person ~*Kinky_sweetheart~*
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
U made me cry! Which is not easy!
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic!
I'm bookmarking it as soon as i finish reviewing!
It's awesome!
~*Kinky_sweetheart*~
person NyaNya
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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