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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good one-shot. I'm sure you've heard this already like a million times, but the twist was really good. After I finished teh fic, I had to go back and reread the whole thing. The second time I read it, especially the hospital scene, I realized that in your whole fic you didn't mention who died. I though it was Naruto! but it wasn't, and I cried anyway 'cause one of them died! Such a sad fic, *sniffle*. Please don't touch it; don't make it into a multichapter fic, it's fine as a one-shot. I love it.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice twist. ill admit i thought for a moment that it was naruto that had died... cute story.
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The last time something touched my heart was so long ago. This story seriously had me in tears, hell, IM still crying. Its beautiful, seriously. Sad,yes, but so beautiful. Thanks alot for writing something so touching and sharing it with the world.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved that so much! I am actually cryin "sob sob" agh.... And I very much liked the twist, but still very sad...
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh God. That was rough. Good job.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man...what a saaaaaaaaaad story. and what a twist in the end! it totally reminded me of sixth sense...heh...seriously -_- wahhh i really loved it.
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well thankyou, i am now bawling in the middle of an internet cafe with people watching me like i just turned into a smear on the bottom of a pair of shoes. *phew* very emotional. thanx i needed a good cry! here is a rose for you @--^---
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really good, I love it.
I really enjoyed how the ending came out. I'm always lookinf for stories that have a twist at the end and I can safely say that your story is at the top of my list.
They way it flowed was thoughtful and fluent.
Really enjoyed reading this one.
Good luck with ither stories.
I really enjoyed how the ending came out. I'm always lookinf for stories that have a twist at the end and I can safely say that your story is at the top of my list.
They way it flowed was thoughtful and fluent.
Really enjoyed reading this one.
Good luck with ither stories.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Simply Beautiful.
-Oubliette
-Oubliette
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My God... That made me cry.
... it was so depressing, at the beginning I had thought Naruto died,,, but... aww... that was so emotionial....
I love this story alot, I'm gonna recommend it to any and all of my SasuNaru friends.
*sniff*
It was just too sad ;_:
Extremely good work, I don't think any other SasuNaru fiction moved me like that one.
... it was so depressing, at the beginning I had thought Naruto died,,, but... aww... that was so emotionial....
I love this story alot, I'm gonna recommend it to any and all of my SasuNaru friends.
*sniff*
It was just too sad ;_:
Extremely good work, I don't think any other SasuNaru fiction moved me like that one.