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omigosh *sniffle* it's sooooooooooooo sad. It's great writing, the only complaint I have is that it's sooooooooooo sad. Poor Naruto. *sniffle sniffle*

What a shock!I did not see that coming at all.How utterly sad.Very moving.My god ,I don't know what to say...

ow man, im crying :_:


your story is really good....

:_: :_:

i'm waiting for your next story :_:

... i cried... i really cried... this is sad. sad, but anything but bad. sad in a good way. if that didn't make any sense, it's the tears.

DAMNIT! *sniff* I told myself that I wasn't going to read this story becasue I always get so worked up in tragic loves story-one-shots, but then of course, I had to go and prove to myselfthat I can take it, and then.....WAAAAAAAAAA! damn you, I'm sad now! It was so beautifully written. I was really hoping for a minute there that it had all been a mistake, when Naruto came bursting into the house, but nooooooo! Sasuke turned out to be the ghost. And they can't be together. Because of some reckless driver, and I hope that person got friggin' sued by Sasuke's parents, for destroying that romance...Oh yeah, and I also liked that you brought in Konohamaru. ^_^ I always thoughtthat he, Naruto, and Sasuke would make a great love triangle.

...Yeah...
I don't know what to say either.
Totally caught me off-guard too, not something I expected to come across as I skimmed through the NaruSasuNaru stuff...
(Oh I love it when something brand new shows up.)
Oh that was so niiiiice... ::surreptitiously blows nose into sleeve::
*confetti*!
-DeeDubya

Your story is really touching... I dont have any critisism(sp?)... I have tears in my eyes when I finished reading it... soo good!

*sobbing* holy shit! That was amazing!... and amazingly sad! I loved it so much! How touching!

That was so sad, I was close to tears. I hope you write other one-shots but a little happier. Or you could make another chapter, with Naruto finding a way to bring Sasuke make to life that would be great. Can't wait to see what you do next.

That was very well done! You touched all the correct strings, without over-doing anything. I hope to see something happier in the future!