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for Drunk and Disorderly

by oubliette

person Exane
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wooo~~another fully sex fic!!
write more!! cause i love this smex you write!! X3!!
person AkiraVadel
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job. It's meeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see the next chapter gurly!! Keep up the good work!


~Akira~
person R
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yummeeeeeeee. honestly, that was steamy. perfect circumstances don't hurt... ;D
person blisblop
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your name.I liked your story except for how stupid Sakura is,but if she doesn't know that it was Naruto,still ,one almost kiss against all that rejection,I hate her being so desperate that she sexually harasses Sasuke and demeans herself.Its gross.Makes for good jokes however.Its almost cliche by now.I like the contest ect.I liked the action..more more..please.Thank you.i really liked the idea that there was a history of embarresing encounters between them.It made the story much more believeable.Coos at embarrassed Sas.
person Xavier
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your fic was good. I liked how you set up the story, but I have to say there were a lot of typos and spelling errors. None the less, I look foward to your next chapter.
person lo
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was nicley written, a fun read. Keep up the good work.
person MeLaiya
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man i fucking loved that. keep up the good work
person Billy
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
There has to be more, a lot more!!!!!!!!!!
Please!!!!
-Billy
person Emina
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nothing better then drunken SasuNaru smut.

I hardly noticed the grammerical errors... I mean, I was too distracted with all the yaoi goodness xD

Great job and hope you write more ^^
person MultifacetedTune
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute and well done -- keep up the good work!!!