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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I can actually picture it happening and the characters are so in-tune with the ones in the series. Keep it up. I also like those weapons you added and the fight scenes are pretty vivid too.
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BLOODY SATISFACTION FUCK YEAH!!!
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* Another cool chapter. =) So when is there going to be lemon? At the Sakura Festival? Oh, and you handled the fight scene very well. *nods* Yeah, so update soon!
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are god
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter seven and I can't wait to see where the story goes next. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As I expected another GREAT chapter, I was jjust hoping not to wait forever for another one though. :(
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY STILL PWNS!!!
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Upate as soon as you can! I do really love the plot here.....!
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww....... another cute chapter...... Dude...... Take as long as you need to rewrite the story (even if you don't rewrite and release what you wanted to in the first place i'd still be happy.... but..... i love the story so far and if it remains this good after a rewrite then..... go ahead rewrite :) )...... Just don't abandon us ok ?
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is great, Naruto and Sakura's affections for each other are obviously deepening. I'm glad you decided to rework the later stories, shows conviction on your part. Keep up the good work!