rate_review Reviews

That was an impressive first time thar. Me thinks Hinata's been spending some quality time with a penis-shaped friend. She certainly seemed to know what she was doing.

Very nice fic.

My only critique is that TEN years seemed like a really long time. As in, it felt unrealistic that it would have been that long. Ninja's have to live their lives like every day is their last, so I can't believe that she'd stay a virgin for TEN YEARS. Ten years is a freakin' long time. I think four years is a long enough time for her to have grown up, and them both to have developed enough. TEN years is too long.

Sorry- aside from that it's great!!

That Was Sexy.Pretty Well-Written,As Well.

Good one! Whew!!!

ok i read your story and you had me lol at the end... your right men don't know women to good/.... so tell me do you have more like this one????? ha have you done one of Sakura and there teacher the one with one eye showing???

Can I start laughing my head off here? That last part was funny! Good job! And I was reading it with the best of foods, chocolate and coffee :D

i just loved this one shot. it was very good.

awwww!!! This is so cute and Good!! I loved it alot

that was acely, so fucking hot! Please make a second chapter or a sequel and inform me if you do.
I love Nej/Hina and you for making this awesome story.

it was a goood story, i did like it. i love the paring of neji and hinata, even they are cousins who share the same surname.

Kawaii...