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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!
It a realy cute and good story!! It make me think about the 148 episode of naruto. I donT know if you have saw it but it was so good. In that episode you can lean more about Hinata!!! And she had cread a new technic of fight and is was soooooooooooooo good. It just a episode must see!!!!!
I can' wait to read you next story!!!!
It a realy cute and good story!! It make me think about the 148 episode of naruto. I donT know if you have saw it but it was so good. In that episode you can lean more about Hinata!!! And she had cread a new technic of fight and is was soooooooooooooo good. It just a episode must see!!!!!
I can' wait to read you next story!!!!
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I try to avoid Neji/Hinata as most tend to be creepy, but this one was certainly not. I liked how you had them interact with each other, you did a very good job with thm. This was a nice sweet story. Thank you very much, and keep up the good work.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was marvellous! Such depth of feeling between Neji and Hinata.
And kudos for not falling into the broken hymen cliche!
And kudos for not falling into the broken hymen cliche!
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehe...Hiashi and Hanabi are so slick. Hanabi SHOULD consider theatre.
very good. all nice and angsty, and you had the characters down pretty good. Neji, at least I thought, was perfect. Kudos to you!
very good. all nice and angsty, and you had the characters down pretty good. Neji, at least I thought, was perfect. Kudos to you!
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really good! I enjoyed it alot. My favorite part is that Hanabi was such a good actress! She totally had me fooled!