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for Hurt

by Trollmia

person littleflower
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!
It a realy cute and good story!! It make me think about the 148 episode of naruto. I donT know if you have saw it but it was so good. In that episode you can lean more about Hinata!!! And she had cread a new technic of fight and is was soooooooooooooo good. It just a episode must see!!!!!
I can' wait to read you next story!!!!
person aoshi4misao
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I try to avoid Neji/Hinata as most tend to be creepy, but this one was certainly not. I liked how you had them interact with each other, you did a very good job with thm. This was a nice sweet story. Thank you very much, and keep up the good work.
person Serenia
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was marvellous! Such depth of feeling between Neji and Hinata.
And kudos for not falling into the broken hymen cliche!
person Roushutsu
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehe...Hiashi and Hanabi are so slick. Hanabi SHOULD consider theatre.

very good. all nice and angsty, and you had the characters down pretty good. Neji, at least I thought, was perfect. Kudos to you!
person tatemshope
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really good! I enjoyed it alot. My favorite part is that Hanabi was such a good actress! She totally had me fooled!