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for Catalyst

by Totchi

person Rivkagh
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm absolutely loving this, just the kind of fic I had wanted to read lately! Well written, nice characterization, everything- great. Keep it up. ^_^
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHH!!!!! Shika and Ino know!! What'll happen now?????? A lil SasuNaru fluff! How kawaii! Can't wait to know what happens next! Much Love ~koolanimefreek
person Leasan
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, what an awesome start!! I love it!!
I love the pairings, I love the way they've all changed!!
And I simply LOVE your style of writing, so fluent and gripping without any extraordinary things happening.
The strength lies in dialogues and realistic characters, I guess.
In short: I just can't wait for more!!
UPDATE ASAP!!
person aoshi4misao
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an evil way to end! More please ^_^ I like this alot so far, good job and keep up the good work.
person Kori Nibiki
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even for a "short" intro, it was very good. I look forward to the next update. Keep up the good writing. Ja!
person MeLaiya
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this, please update soon
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this so far! So Sakura has a lil crush on Naruto and he's with Sasuke! But why are they so secretive about it? And Hinata is in on it too. She is just sooo sweet! I'm glad she's such a good friend and it's not trying to come between them. What about Ino and Shika what will they find? Can't wait to know what happens next! UPDATE SOON! Much Love ~koolanimefreek
person blisblop
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooow.I like.Rained on boys in t shirts.Thank you muchly.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting idea, and quite well written -- I look forward to seeing where you take this. Keep up the good work!
person vashta
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this. Please let there be Sakura bashing, and no trouble for Nar and Sas. I think they are perfect. It is time for Sak to get hurt, she was always hurting Naruto with her words. It has a good start and could go many ways, but I will hold you to the M/M pairing in the summ.