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for An Evening's Entertainment

by Serenia

person Naoto
schedule May 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg I need more of this! So amazing!
person shawna
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was so fucking sexy I LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
person Shikas_Shadow
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*school girl giggle* That was so great! It was written beautifully! And I really love the GaaraXShikamaru pairing, especially Gaara being master and Shika being the slave. *droolz at thought of Shikamaru chained on the wall* Keep writing more Shika fics! This one was amazing!
person Sable
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! This had me captivated! At first, I was afraid they'd be OOC, but their actions seemed curiously in character. I can see Shikamaru being disconcerted at such a new situation, but adapting well, as he always does, and Gaara could finally find pleasure, even if he had to control every facet of it. The sex was hot, of course, and the grammar and spelling were perfect. My only suggestion is that you draw it out more, use more descriptions. Never underestimate the power of waxing eloquent! Still, I very much enjoyed myself while reading this. Great job.
person aoshi4misao
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
**Grin. That was awesome. I love Shikamaru and Gaara, they are my two favorite people in the show. I will generally read anything that involves either of them, so when I saw this fic was about them both (a pairing for some reason I had never considered before) I just had to read it, and I'm glad that I did. Rarely is bondage and the like written well, but you pulled it off. Thank you for the idea and the courage to write such an odd but wonderful pairing. Keep up the good work.
person Elisa Ardell
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I really enjoyed that. Keep up the good work!!! A WOOTANS seal of approval for you!!!