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for When Worlds Collide

by Totchi

person Hanako
schedule December 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the story. I hope you continue with it.
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, please continue
person Akaatje
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jeepers, you have made me curious!
PLease update? PLease? (A)
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You evil evil person! Update now.

It's very good so far.
person Onawa
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a few typos, and name substitution - Kakashi when I think you ment Iruka. I am looking forward to the rest of the story - please keep going!
person Hestia
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please! I read this a while back, but no update--I reread it and conclude--it's good and you should add a chapter--please?!
person Rede
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are a bad person! Leaving us hanging like that! Write, please for the love of Kaka/Iru write! Please!!!!

Love the story by the way.
person Shi-Shi
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Mutters* When are you going to update this UBER-fabulous story huh? ??? Just curious... yeah... it's been a while... and it's such a wonderful story and plot!
person snow887
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what the person above me said :D


please?
person trouble
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
REVIEWED!!! NOW WORK FASTER!!! GET TO THE SMUT!!! GET TO THE DAMN HOT SEX BETWEEN PERVERT AND INNOCENT LITTLE MAN!!!