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I think this is the best Naruto/Jiraiya fic I've ever read. ^_^

Whoa.Thourough,loved the flash backs and Yeah! these kids are gonna be messed up,their elders should be paying more attention but thats what happens when kids bring up kids and violence is the only way.No time for more subtle arts,thats why in spite of it all I can't hate Orochimaru, he started down his path to figure out a way that would make people dying in war obsolete.He seems insane now but????We know little but he trains kids others are terrified of,he uses them like tools(as does leaf) and he seems to have a love of anarchy he uses biological studies to further his goal of knowing all jutsus.. Jir fought hard here and Naruto still seems to have twisted.Solid,hot,valid ,uncomfortable work.Pats on back for you.Again odd wonderful insite pulled off with a sharp style and taste.

Nice detail and great plot. Kind of... unnerving, but still really good. Great job.

What a wonderful plotbunny it is! Honestly, all of Jiraiya's thinking just improved the story. Great smut + unique character development = Shingo's new favorite lemon! Yay!

Ah, this was definately interesting to read; it's the first naruto/jiraiya fanfic I've seen. I really enjoyed this; the lead up was detailed but not boring. You're a great writer, hope to see more from you!

Wow. That was painfully intense (and incredibly hot). The idea that Naruto would go so far for affection is both depressing and disturbing, but you handled it well. The way Jiraiya kept remembering Orochimaru and drawing parallels between Orochimaru and Naruto was especially heartbreaking; the story works wonderfully as a one-shot, but I think it would be awesome to see a sequel dealing with the aftermath.

Naruto and Jiraiya... They're really a very obvious couple but no one does them! I'm not too much for Kyuubi/ fics, but this was good. (Actually, all your stories are pretty good. =)

KEEP WRITING

WOW! that was great!! I loved how you did that paring! Naruto with fox ear's and tail. ooohh. he would look so cute!! ^_^

that was intersting but YIKES kinda dark, and the way you ended it is Anikin Skywalker all over again! sorry just saw SWIII resently, that was a GREAT story but I wonder if he tries that again how whoever is close by is going to react to the come on. It was really interesting to see the way they used sex as a release for war and tensions and everything. THANKS:D