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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOOT YES ANOTHER GOOD NON YAOI NARUTO FIC I CANT WAIT FOR MORE
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
goodwork so far looking forward towards future chaps
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice make more
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job too bad sauske dies but hey i like angst and sauske well he wasnt my favorite
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot i likes it but i think your fic should be longer though and ill give this a 4/5 not bad at all justr kinda average
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think its really rude to put "NO YAOI" on your summary, thats not the most important thing of a story obviously, you could just say M/F and nothing more. But then you HAVE to make it sound like you hate yaoi and are advertising it, which is stupid and immature.
You also spelled innocence wrong in your title.
You also spelled innocence wrong in your title.