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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chapter 2 = good! ^_^ I loved how you brought Haku in. an interesting concept indeed. and yeah, the Gato part in the beginning was creepy, but then I found it hilarious with Itachi torturing him. go Itachi!
please do write a chapter 3. I'd love to see Kisame's reaction to Haku running off like that
please do write a chapter 3. I'd love to see Kisame's reaction to Haku running off like that
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!! is there gonna be another chapter?!!! *cries* that was so good!!! poor itachi! *hugs him* ahh I normaly dont read kisaIta but... wow that was fucking awsome.. please dont tell me your gnna leave it like that!!!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this, just habitual spelling mistakes were very distracting. Like confusing fallow with follow. Overall, I hope to see where you go with this.
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for reviewing twice but,"PLEASE UPDATE SOON!" I've only recently fallen for this pairing and can't wait for chapter 2. So..."PLEASE UPDATE SOON!" Well you get the idea....
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, so cute! I love it, if you ever write more I will hunt it down and read that too! It's got to be the first fic where there's KisamexItachi with actual romance! Wai! Wai! Again I totally love it!
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I like how you kinda wrote it in 3rd person, but from Itachi's POV. There were some spelling errors in it though, so you might need to work on that. Other than a couple of spelling mistakes the story was good. Can't wait to chap 2!
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this. Humour is a big part of Naruto, so let's see some more of that. =)
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! ^_______^ The first ever fic I've seen with Itachi have a crush on Kisame, and not the other way around! How sweet!!!!!!! Dude, you rock. You rock my socks. This was great, and it made total sense, too. You created a while different side to Itachi that (at least I've) never even thought possible! Totally awesome.
You rock.
SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_____________________^
You rock.
SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_____________________^
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Very nice. So, Ita-kun is not as stoic as we thought he was. But does he need all the stuff to make
As a fourteen year old Itachi could have crawled in Kisame's bed proclaiming he was scared. But as an Uchihacest and Kis/Ita-fan i want to you to write more. Your style is nice and readable. And the fact that Kisame likes Itachi look a likes and itachi has reached a nice age to lose his virginity... more please? ;3
As a fourteen year old Itachi could have crawled in Kisame's bed proclaiming he was scared. But as an Uchihacest and Kis/Ita-fan i want to you to write more. Your style is nice and readable. And the fact that Kisame likes Itachi look a likes and itachi has reached a nice age to lose his virginity... more please? ;3
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And the end of the first sentence should have been: does he need all the stuf to make him look pretty? Itachi is damn sexy. The only thing he needs to do is give kisame a come hither look. XD