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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was a one-shot when i first read it back then and i'm glad to see that you've continued. It's a great story, you've kept itachi and sasuke in character yet slowly develop their feelings. The orochimaru ass-kicking part was especially great *cheers!!!* I just had to mention the conversation of itachi and the leader is aWESOMe. I like leaderxitachi pairing but there's like no fanfic on that at all. That's right, bring on some leaderxitachi action!!! Will any other akatsuki members make their appearance? I liked kisame in the story. Keep it up!!!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a desireable story.I can not think of one bad thing about it.I.m real sick,I'll give better reveiw next time.So please update soon.Its so rich.I lve it.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're my hero! I am so in love with this story that its not even funny. I had never even paid attention to it before for some reason, but then I read it an I was like, 'YAY!' ItaSasu is by far my favorite pairing of Naruto. And you have much Sasuke torture, which is another favorite of mine. Kisame is funny, but the thought of the naked fishman is...to quote Sasuke, 'ewww'. Anyway, you seem to have come up with a unique plot, seeing as the few like have Itachi getting to Sasuke BEFORE he gets to Orochimaru. I like how Itachi is having troubles as well, because who wouldn't want to sexy ass Uchiha? I wonder what the Leader will do when he meets Sasuke, if he ever meets him.
You've kept both brothers pretty much in character, but at the same time, Sasuke is reverting to the Otouto of Itachi. I've always had the feeling, with the manga and anime that Sasuke was kind of just trying to get Itachi to notice him. Yeah, he slaughtered their clan, but Itachi was the most important person to him to begin with. Like he wouldn't jump at the chance to have his 'Nii-san' back. Very disturbed child there. Plus, there hasn't been much of Itachi's actual personality revealed in either the manga or anime, so it's safe to say that you can play around with it a little. I can't wait for the next chapter. You mentioned Deidara, yeah? Will he be making an appearance anytime soon? Keep up the great work, I'm loving it. ^_^
You've kept both brothers pretty much in character, but at the same time, Sasuke is reverting to the Otouto of Itachi. I've always had the feeling, with the manga and anime that Sasuke was kind of just trying to get Itachi to notice him. Yeah, he slaughtered their clan, but Itachi was the most important person to him to begin with. Like he wouldn't jump at the chance to have his 'Nii-san' back. Very disturbed child there. Plus, there hasn't been much of Itachi's actual personality revealed in either the manga or anime, so it's safe to say that you can play around with it a little. I can't wait for the next chapter. You mentioned Deidara, yeah? Will he be making an appearance anytime soon? Keep up the great work, I'm loving it. ^_^
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NWAAAA XDD I love you <3<3<3 please continue with the story soon!!! I couldn't bear it if ANOTHER one of the fics I'm reading stopped with out warning TT__TT I really liked the part with Sir leader and Itachi >333 (kukukuu Itachi uke is teh smexxxx *drools*). I hope you show some parts with them "hint, hint" *nudge, nudge*. And maybe some stuf with the other akatsuki. Not neccessarily sex...but I hope you have them in there (Although, some lemons would be nice :3) tee hee, anyways, just keep doing what your doing, cause it rocks my socks XD.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARRGGG. My thing got cut off. Anyways what I was going to say was...Keep going with the story please!! I couldn't bare it if ANOTHER one of the fics I was reading suddenly stopped without warning TT___TT. I really loved this chapter too. That part with Itachi and Sir Leader was awesome XD I hope you show more parts with them "hint, hint" *nudge, nudge*(kukukuku, Itachi uke is teh smex *drools*). And I was hopeing you would have parts with the other Akatsuki too :3 (Not neccessarily lemons...although I have no objections to them >3 teh heheheh) Anyways, just keep doing what your doing, cause it rocks my socks XDDD.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the most perfect fic ever!! Really!! This thing between them is sooo sexy and hot!! Please continue writing.. i bet people didn't review the last chapter cause there wasn't any smut in it... This chapter is so cool.. Atachi doens't want this but he is falling HARD for his younger brother.. i thing sasuke is falling too... Well, please update soon, ok? i can't wait to read more!! Humm.. i wonder if Atachi is going to be uke for sasuke sometime...
Hugs and congratulations!!
Hugs and congratulations!!
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
post the next chap please ^^
i LOVE the story but too lazy too review, sorry..but i do give a review this time, right?? ^^
i LOVE the story but too lazy too review, sorry..but i do give a review this time, right?? ^^
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! itachi saved sasuke-kun!! its gonna be interesting to see what happens to itachi and sasuke-kun. i wonder what itachi's boss is gonna think of this? update soon! i love the story so far
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, isn't sasuke cuuuute?? Ani..ki.. ha says..I loved this chapter!! Itachi is falling in love, isn't he?! And he is so powerfull.. sexy.. Please update again real soon, okay? Your fic is just to good for your own good! Hugs!!
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... You make me hate Orochimaru more than I already did... really... I feel the urge to kill this bastard! But I LOVED Itachi's reaction though... the way he beat Orochimaru... He really should've killed him... He was so nice to his little brother I loved that aww...~
The chapter was great~ and I really can't wait for more now ^_^ Hopefully chapter 4 will be up soon~ *hopes* ^__^
The chapter was great~ and I really can't wait for more now ^_^ Hopefully chapter 4 will be up soon~ *hopes* ^__^