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Oh,breath-taking wicked.Itachi in action,busting the Snakes brain for Sasuke,sliiiiick.This is totally outside of cliche,it uttery surprising,the dialoge,twists,the vibes between the brothers,sooooooooo much potential.Kowtows.This is great action wise,its witty in its presentation of character quirks,its burning take on there sexual enconters,so fresh,it sweeps one up.Many layers all contrasting with a fine balence,timing and amount of care to detail.Well........I guess you can see I appreitiate this alot.Please update faster,this might be the "Spiral Falling" for this pairing,not tone/story line but a pinacle in a pairings realisation , that happens in a very tight plot ,advancements in plot and character in each chapter,it just gets more involved ,thay become more real,in that way,very re-readable and just a milestone in actual fan fic story telling in this genre.Thanks, both of you,one can see/feel/dare I say taste the love that went into this.My rant ends here....for now.Please excuse my horrible spelling ect and feel the love.

Amazing story. Very hot. I love the way you treat their brotherly relationship.

So fucking good! I'm such a fan of this pairing...and Oro/Sasu too, so I am most appeased. ^_^ Continue to write more!! XD

Ohhh,something terrible is going to happen...that was totally satisfying in everyway, this is a boom fic.Jeez,let Sasuke go with Itachi....pleaze.

Oh my god!! I'm a perv!! They are brothers but.. oh hell.. they are soo hot together!!! Please update again soon! Hugs!

Nice plot! I don't think oro is gonna just give sasuke up is he? I hope itachi can bring him away cause i wanna see how they get along in the three years. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

you have to update soon... dying to read more!!!!O.O

Hey this chapter was really good^^!I like how is presented Itachi in this story...Very nice scene between Uchiha brothers yeah and Orochimaru is so evil and sadistic in this story>_<*will the author kill him in the next chapters??Aw no pliz*
Well,let's just wait for the next chpter^_^ Ja ne~

Thanks so much for the update! Again, very entertaining and well written, and your characterizations ae still up to par. ^^ I have a feeling that something bad is going to happen in the next chapter, though, lol. Can't wait to find out what happens -- Keep up the good work!!! ^___^ Ja ne!!!

You have done SUCH a good job with this story. I love the way you put everything together, adding in actions and thoughts but still managing to keep everything the same. And how the heck do you somehow know what I was thinking as I was playing Sasuke??

It's so weird to see our RP as a story, but it's so interesting, too. I know I've read most of what you've written so far before, but I can't wait to see more! *shifty eyes* UPDAAAAATE...