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for The Jutsu of Surrender

by ShadowsCall

person blisblop
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THank you sooooooooooo much.Made my day,week.Things are getting even more exciting,un.
person RedCloudAngel
schedule May 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is so interesting. Love it. I think it's a nice touch that Kisame and Deidara were coming with the Uchiha brothers. It should spice things up. Update soon. Or put it in FF.net.
person blackbloodedkunoichi
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do you *know* how *much* I *love* this story!!?!? IT'S SO GREAT I LOVE IT TO BITS!! And you know...it's just so great! I LOVE ITTTT!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! This is by far my favourite ItaSasu story! It's...beautiful so...so...urgh I adore it! I read it nearly everyday, and I *always* check to see if you have updated! The chapter 11 reminded me of "fated" by mathew good band! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I ADORE IT IT'S WHOAH!!!

Please update soon or I will die and cry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MUCH LOVE YO
person Reemu-Chan
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you ^^ I sencerely do. *Hugs you tightly* You are one of the Authors that I've been waiting oh so desperately for to come back. This was the first Uchihacest that I've started and I was depressed when the site went down. Just this morning I was looking through AFF to coment on a story, and what do you know. I find this story. At first I thought I was dreaming. I'm serious. I've had a few dreams where my beautiful stories came back to me. When I realized that I was awake and that you really HAD updated, and omg, by like 3 chapters. . . wow. What an update. I love you ^^ I'm giving you three separate comments. I reread the 8th chapter and just now finished reading the 9th. WOW. Have I mentioned that I love you. You're writing is still very good and your smut is so amazing I could die of happiness. Hate Leader. Have I failed to mention that in the past? Anyways, I'm about to head off and start the 10 chapter. I'm deathly curious as to how you progressed the story from where the 9th chapter ended. As for the Author of 'Chasing Naruto' (I haven't read 'Convictions' yet. Well, barely started that is. The site had shut down as I got to it.) She finished the last chapter. Can you not find it? It's so damn awesome. I'll see if I can find it. If I can, I'll send you the link ^-^



Redwitch05 ^.~

person Reemu-Chan (not signed in)
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww. I love the way chapter 10 ended. That is sooooo cute. I love fluff. You are awesome ^-^ It's been awhile since I've read anything like that. Sasuke watching over his older brother. That really IS cute. Sorry for lack of vocab, but cute stories due that to me ^^*

Can't wait to see what happens with their plans

I'm off to read the next chapter ^^


Rw
person Reemu-Chan (not signed in)
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Does a happy dance after reading the 11th chapter* Man, you scared me for a sec there. When Sasuke was being touching by Leader and noticed that Itachi wasn't doing anything or hinting anything out that he was ready for the plan, I began to worry. And that comment that he made about Sasuke may not be that bad at kissing . . . I couldn't really tell if he was serious. But then there was that thing that Sasuke was thinking of just afterwards. No sex. XD Dude, that was just funny. But I was seriously beginning to doubt the plan and all UNTIL I remembered all those internal monologues that Itachi would have with himself. About escaping and finally being with the only person that ever mattered to him. Have I declared my undying love for this story? <3 Sadly, I do believe that several Authors and many readers have left this site. But hopefully they'll be coming back. That'll be great, ne? Btw, I haven't reached the episode yet where Deidera is mentioned. Does he say 'unn' in the anime/manga? Just to let you know, you adding it in the last chapter was not something that threw us off as weird. ^^ It sounds cute.

Later, Can't wait till you next update. And you only had a few mistakes in those last few chaps. But no worries. Compared to a lot of the stories that I've been reading recently here. . . .yours is one of the few that seem flawless and error free.

Have a Nice Day ^^ You've certainly made mine


Redwitch05
person Goth Flamango
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I love this chapter! When Itachi said I love you I wanted to cry! *happy tears* It was so cute! It was a little sad what with the thing with Leader and everything... But still cute. Please continue! ^_^
person DafodillYamanaka
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I finished the story. I love it so much and omg after reading that last chapter I had to go pee so bad. ^///^ that is a really really really good story ^0^ *drools lustfully*

Cheyenne K.
person DafodillYamanaka
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh so I DID already leave a review. I could't remember ^^ I was busy that day and I couldn't remember if I dreamt that I left a comment or not. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter
take care


Cheyenne K.
person UchihaLover
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really awesome story you have going on. I love it a lot. I cannot wait for the next chapter. It's killing me to know what's going to happen next. can't wait for the next Chapter

Stone