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for The Jutsu of Surrender

by ShadowsCall

person Honheim Alex
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Yawn* man I'm tired. just woke up about 20 min. ago. I stayed up all night reading the rest of your fan fic. Man, my friend was right. This IS the best story I have ever read. I don't read much btw. I'm the type that judges a book by it's cover. Can't help it. I've always been that way. Even last year as a senior I've refered to cliffsnotes.com ^_^ I'm THAT lazy. can't wait for the next chapter.
person honto pervert
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is so cute it hurts... i really like it. my only complaint is that deidara is way out there.
person Reemu-Chan
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi again ^-^
just wanted you to know that I told a couple of my friends (ages of 17-19) about your fanfic. Some promised to start reading it tonight (time is 12:47 at the moment) and others when they get a break off work. anyways, they promised to send some nice reviews just for you ^_^
so ya
Take Care <3

~Rw

btw, even though in this fanfic you made Sasuke have long hair, I drew one of him with short and with a collar around his neck. I posted the pic on Deviant the other day, saying that I got the idea from a fanfic (which was yours) ^.^ but I didn't say the name b/c I didn't want someone underage come here and . . . . well, you know ^///^ read what Sasuke and Itachi are doing.
person DafodillYamanaka
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Story recommended to me by Reemu-Chan (Redwitch05)

OMG. I'm on the 3rd chapter right now. I can't believe you didn't get many reviews after the second chapter. It was sooooo good. I absolutely love it.

Cheyenna K.
person Baby Hernandez
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's an incredible story. I love it so much. I feel almost hesitant to send this review. I don't normally read stories like these, but then again, neither does my friend who recommended the story for me to read. She (Redwitch05) told me that she originally saw your name on someone else's site and decided to read your story and liked it from the Very Beginning. So I decided I'll read it with one of my girlfriends (She LOVES Itachi and Sasuke). I began to get shy b/c there were a lot of parts to the story that I really enjoyed, but I didn't want my friend to think I'm crazy. I noticed her blushing when Itachi was forcing sex on poor Sasuke-kun (That was the part that I was on as well) oh, we were sitting in diff chairs very close to the computer. I asked her if she'd feel comfortable if I had the lights off, and when she said yes, we continued the story until she had to go home (she was just visiting me) we both stopped at the 5th chap and then continued the next day (which is today) and finished reading it about an hour ago. ^_^ It's a very nice story. I loved the end especially. Looks like Sasuke was finally able to top his brother. I was all like ----> WHOA!!! Hope you update soon.
person DafodillYamanaka
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally finished reading the rest of your story. Chapter 8 was hot. I reread it about 4 times so far. I'm yaoi crazy, I know ^0^ you're my favy writer. I'll come here more often just to see when you next update.
Itachi finally said, "I love you" to Sasuke. That made me cry. don't worry, it was happy tears. I sure wish I was in bed with them. oh hey, so does Sasuke have long hair like his bro? He has it in a ponytail and everything? sorry. I just don't know if I read that right or not. Love you cause you've made my day

CheyenneK.
person Honheim Alex
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had an online friend tha mentioned this fan fic to me earlier today. I'm still at work but I decided to read half the first chapter to see if it's any good. After reading that Sasuke has to put up with a Collar and leash I decided to read further. Now I'm in the middle of the second chapter. I'm planning on reading the rest when I get home. so far so good =^_^=
person Honheim Alex
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had an online friend tha mentioned this fan fic to me earlier today. I'm still at work but I decided to read half the first chapter to see if it's any good. After reading that Sasuke has to put up with a Collar and leash I decided to read further. Now I'm in the middle of the second chapter. I'm planning on reading the rest when I get home. so far so good =^_^=
person LoveUsagi
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have to update soon, before I go crazy>___< But seriously its great fic=^^=
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok you've got me hooked!! i cant wait for the rest of the story!! if you uodate soon i'll give you one of my brownies!! i make good borwnies!! hey i'm giving you a nice life size itachi plushi now!! if this was fanfiction.net then i'd be adding this to my favorite stories!! please update!