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for The Jutsu of Surrender

by ShadowsCall

person Hawkeye23
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's some story you have going on. I can't wait for the next chapter =)
person YaoiFreak
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Plzz, countinue this is the best ItaSasu fic I ever read!!!:)
person BrokenDeathAngel
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaaaaaaaa!!!The scrumpcious smuts unn!!My mouth waters the whole time when I read this unn!XD YAY!Itachi said the magic words unn!!FINALLY! ^w^ Luff the way you potray Kisame unn.Oh!And Deidara too!Really funny the way he plays with his food unn.I should try and make sculptures out of mash potatoes sometimes unn!Ahhhhh~~Really unn!Your Uchihacest always make me feel light-headed unn!How am I suppose to finish my homework when my brain is melted away by your fic unn?!XD I wish I could re-read this fic again now but alas I have tons of homework to finish by today unn.Review ya till next chappie unn!!(more smex unn!XD)

My brain is forever melting by your mouth-watering Uchihacest,
BrokenDeathAngel
person ShinkuYami
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is awsome! no other words can describe it. Please, please update soon!
person Angela Rice
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's fucken hot. I'm freaken horny now.
person Saiph
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a REALLY good story! Please continue!
person Reemu-Chan
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I feel kinda shy saying this and all, but your story turns me on ^///^ I never EVER thought that I'd be interested in a ItachiXSasu fanfic. Man was I wrong. I've been checking everyday for the passed week to see if you had updated your story, and then finally . . . . my luck came last night when I saw that you had added another chapter. WOW. That chapter was . . .. WOW *sigh* I didn't expect for it to be so long and so. . . . . ummmmmm.. .. 'what's the word I'm looking for???'. . . .oh yeah, /sex driven/
Rather than feeling hot while reading the 8th chapter. . . .I felt so tingly. The atmosphere that you created made everything seem so romantic. ^^ Great job.
oh, and about the whole Resident Evil thing with Zombies taking over the Akatsuke clan. .. . XD That's rich. I was LMAO. I love Resident evil ^^

Well, hope my comment meant something
~RW

oh and one more thing: Leader deserves to die. He needs to be killed by Sasuke or something. *laughs sadistically* Have his dick cut off *smiles menacingly* that would be nice. lol. btw, I feel that I got some pointers from your story. I'm a virgin who's VERY unexperienced and doesn't even like to think about guys. . . .unless you count anime ones. does that count ^^?
person blisblop
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Screams(loud and long)Oh yeah!I needed that.Itachi is still a killer in many ways.I always thought "leader" was Uchiha,I mean,Kishimoto sama showed it( I won't grace it with a more understanding pronoun)with the Sharingan...not that he couldn't have other reasons for having it...all those dead eyes going to waste after Itachi cleaned house.Well they ,Itachi and Bro Koi,are on a more even keele,good stuff.I almost had a hemorage when Itachi told Sasuke to "fuck him hard".I had to get up,have a smoke to settle my nerves then fozen Dim Sum to settle my stomache then..I dove in.Oh yes ,the suspence was almost as sweet as the words...which were slightly tangy.Go Sasuke,rock his world. Not that I like cliff hangers that I don't arrange myself.No,NO,no,I do not.Kisame is a character for sure,he does seem more mature then Itachi,good,Itachi is still so younge.That thing trying to play with his mind...if he is looking to replace Orochimaru he sorry ,It could not have choosen a worse nin.Idiot.I liked that Sasuke wants Itachi with clear eyes on the now not some past urge carried forth.You are god.I love this.I was soooo happy to see it updated.Sighs.Oddly leader being an asshole is making Itachi more open to Sasuke...hen hen.I like that.Excelcior!
person blueinferno
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh yay another chapter!!...I don't much like the idea Itachi as uke but hey...it twas amusing haha
person Billy
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is the best!!!!!!!!!
You should update sooner...
Please...
It would be very nice...
Never stop with the hard work...
And please never have it end...