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for The Jutsu of Surrender

by ShadowsCall

person Mademoiselle_LaCroix
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.....I'm close too tears...they are so cute...and I would have never thought of this chapter to end like this...~sigh~...please don't let me wait for the next one as long as this time...
person anon
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! youre the best writer
person BrokenDeathAngel
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6: ..................*nosebleeds* Honey dont ever stop writing unn! OMG!Pls pls add more fluffs in the next next chappie unn!X3
person BrokenDeathAngel
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7 Review:

My dear,you have done it again unn!Fantastic chappie unn although I dont quite like the pairing of Leader X Itachi unn.But still!This ish a very nice chappie unn!A break from Uchihacest action for a while unn!^w^ Ahhhh!!The waiting for more Uchiha smex unn!Stop teasing and suspensing the readers unn.XD Ah well I dont mind waiting for the next Uchiha smex unn.Ohhh!!I cant wait to find out what Sasuke will find while exploring the Akatsuki place unn!Well until then,keep writing your fabulous uchihafic unn or ELSE! *threatens* XD

Still your worshipper,
BrokenDeathAngel

P/s:Arigato for visiting and whoring my fanwork unn!I luffs you unn!X3 I'm so gonna start your V-day Itasasu piccie ASAP unn! *licks you* XD
person Mademoiselle_LaCroix
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...oh...new chapter..~scream~....yeeeeaaah...please, I can hardly wait until the next one is on.....
person viciouscallisto
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor itachi! i felt bad for the kid...which is weird 'cause well, he's itachi...but whatever. so, sasuke-kun's gonna go exploring? i wonder what he's gonna find? update soon, i devour each chapter. =^_^=
person Billy
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!
You have to update sooner!
I can't wait this long...
It's too good...
Please I love it so much!
person Goth Flamango
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Poor Itachi.... I love this story! Please continue. ^_^
person ladystar
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thats was good continue please!
person sasha
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done. I'm not normally a fan of Uchihacest, but you write it so well...I like this. Don't worry about being in character or not, it really isn't a big deal and your fic is so enticing. -sigh- That Itachi is so damn fuckable...-cough- well, now that comment is out of my system and I can move on...Continue to write the way you are, it's wonderful. I'll keep and eye on this fic for an update.