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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I love this story! *glomp* It's so awesome. Very well written. Update soon please! ^_^
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Urg, it's so good! It always amazes me to see how you take our RP and make it into such a great story, and yet I can still see parts of our RP that I clearly remember, especially in the dialogue. I love all the little bits that you add in, subtle actions and such, that just really make it all seem real. PLEASE write more soon! *glomps*
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the first consensual ita/sasu story I have read, and it's amazing. only thing I noticed is that for some reason the way you write Sasuke makes me picture him as how he was when he was little. Maybe that's just because he's recovering from what Orochimaru did, since he seemed older in the earlier chapters, but definitely the latest depicts him as being a lot younger. I'm not sure I like that so much, but either way, great story and I hope you continue!
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I hope you finish the story because I really like the way it's written. It's getting pretty interesting but it seems like things are going to have to take a tragic turn. It's quite enjoyable the only problem I'm having is the "none of the less" the phrase is "none the less." If that one phrase were corrected I'd like the story even more.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh where are you?Dying out here !
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say how much this story intrigued me. I'd just recently figured the Sasuke/Itachi pairing and this was the first I read, I'm glad too because it was an experience worthwhile. If you ever continue, I'll be back to read it to the end.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely LOVE this story *___*
it's....so....so cute xD
"No sex.For one month." <- itachi is never ever going to last
I really hope that you'll keep on writing - there are not many storys which captured my mind like this one ^^
~lime
it's....so....so cute xD
"No sex.For one month." <- itachi is never ever going to last
I really hope that you'll keep on writing - there are not many storys which captured my mind like this one ^^
~lime
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely LOVE this story *___*
it's....so....so cute xD
"No sex.For one month." <- itachi is never ever going to last
I really hope that you'll keep on writing - there are not many storys which captured my mind like this one ^^
~lime
it's....so....so cute xD
"No sex.For one month." <- itachi is never ever going to last
I really hope that you'll keep on writing - there are not many storys which captured my mind like this one ^^
~lime
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo I really like this fic...
Please update soon...
Itachi x Sasuke is soo hot...and I need more of it! XD
Please update soon...
Itachi x Sasuke is soo hot...and I need more of it! XD
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice storyline :) Itachi sure is slowing developing feelings for sasuke-chan ne. They'll deal more with oro in the future won't they? I'm hoping to see more scenes between leader and itachi. The way leader is called... um leader is cute XD
update soon!
update soon!