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for Just another day in paradise

by arora1

person KrazyKid
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good. You have a gift for writing. I can't wait to find out what happens next
person Snowy Winters
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your story so far :D i had to cry a little when naruto almost died. But on the end with Kimimaro, i hope he's not one of the rapists trying to get Naruto and Sauke out of the way. Hope it will result in an happy end too. again, great story, keep it up :D
person Courtney
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* the suspence that you had managed to write just made me break down T^T!!!!! I really love this story and I can't wait for you to update.
person worsel
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't even describe how much I love this! And thank you for making sure Hinata had a backbone! ^_^ *pours love and adoration on you*
person Ile
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... that story is just AMAZING!! lol but you said that you got this story beta'd for a few chapters?? uhm.. i noticed a lot of mistakes soo maybe have it checked over a few more times... anyways i still love this story!!
person Ayra of the Halfbreeds
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg I love this story angst and all. Please update soon I wanna know if Kihmararo is working for orochimaru or or if sasuke realizes his love for sasuke or or if they will force naruto back to the orpange i muuuusssssttt know Xs!! So yeah update soon cause this is such a great story.
person Ayra of the Halfbreeds
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Erk I meant love for naruto X3 i menat if sasuke realizes his love for naruto XD sorry for the misprint
person macy
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
and just when i thought that the worst is finally over...kimimaru appears! oh my god. oh my god. oh my god. i can't believe it!!!! *continues my state of shock* that was excellent. thank you for keeping naruto alive, i just hope he stays that way (sasuke too). i am eagerly (as in suuuuper eagerly) waiting for the next intallment. thanks!
person losthimagain
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap.....this is not good is it......I hope Naruto gets better!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see what happends!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (words can not discribe how much she wants an update or how kick ass that last chapter was)

-The Update Monster
person Mystie
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, good thing i stocked up on tissues in the beginning of the fic.
is kimimaro siding with Orochimaru (like in the anime?)
why didn't he say something?