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for Just another day in paradise

by arora1

person RyuichiSakuma2
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is sooooo good. Angsty. >.- It's so sad too.
Keep updating. Please~

-Ryu <3
person ManChesterEngland
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story. u have a lot of typos and stuff but it doesn't ruin the quality of the materail. i cannot wait for the next upload. please hurry!
person losthimagain
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for an update!!!!!!!!!! But wpuld you please save Gaara I love him ever so much and I don't like to see him suffer!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Sasuke is being a good little suviver of a masmurder good for him!!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs you* I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster
person Sheli
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright, they're getting out, but won't Sasuke's accounts be traceable? What kind of trouble are you going to put my boys in again? Ah, I can't wait for the next chapter. Let's hope they can escape from Orochimaru for good so poor Naruto doesn't have to be abused anymore.
person Tac
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*praises* kya another update! please more! This chapter didnt have the same dark feel as the rest but i love how trapped everything is and sasuke gives us that wonderful little hope at the end! keep it up i dont want this fic to end!
person the stranger who can't spell
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I thought this was pretty funny......I just got to shapter 7 and there was a warning that sead CHARECTER DAETH and I got a huge grin on my face and sead "RAELLY!!!!!!!!!!!"
person Trekiael
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, another great chapter! I'm really happy about it! Naruto talked! And you did it well, him not wanting to say anyting at first but doing it when he sees that Sasuke was genuinely worried about him and stayed up all night. And Sasuke is willing to pay for his surgery! AND you made Sasuke understanding what happened well. In the previous chapter, I told you I thought Sasuke couldn't really be called a genius if he couldn't even figure it out, but there you make me shut up this big mouth of mine, but it couldn't have been thinked any less of you, knowing as great of an author you are! And the little bit of cuteness in the end was well deserved. Damn you're good! The only thing that bother me it't that's sooo troublesome to read your story by having to slide to the right every line. Love ya! Ja ne!
person Kuna
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shizune picked it up and spread it over the both of them, patting Naruto on the head and winking before retreating to the office.
Thats my fav part this might mean we get to see more action (sex) between naru+Sas
person Kenz
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah go sasuke!
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good!