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i dunno if i have reviewed this story yet but i have been following it for a while, very nice XDD I enjoy it lots, poor Naruto though, i want Sasuke to be his knight-in-shiney-armour. XDDDD I look forward to another chapter from you (hopefully soon? *wink wink*)

I was reading through your reviews and unsureinherseat said that you were wrong in saying that the DA would be the prosecutor but it is right. DA doesn't stand for Defense Attorney, it stands for District Attorney. Or ADA for Assistant District Attorney. You probably already know that I just wanted to say so you wouldn't think you were wrong.

Also i dunno if you altered it for your fic but Naruto is a minor. Even if he constented the law says he isn't old enough to make that choice. Not until he is 18 years old. And Orochimaru could still get arrested for rape/sex with a minor/Phebophilia/and more that i am having issues remembering right now -_-;;

I am never going to pass that stupid BAR exam T.T

Anyways yeah, the DA is wrong, sex with a minor is sex with a minor, under the age of 18 the question of consent is null and void, by law they are unable to make that choice themselves.

By the way DA is Defence Attourney(sp?) They would be the one defending the accused. I think you wanted a prosocuting attourney though i am not too clear on that one.

It's 6am and I've been up all night trying to play catch up so I'm a little too tired to leave a good review but I just wanted to say that this is a good chapter. Makes me wanna cry and not too many things make me wanna cry these days. Life just isn't fair to Naruto:'( I'm happy to see that you seem to be working on this story regularly and not making it a backup story like you said. I think both of your stories are equally good and I'm excited about them both. I can't wait for the next chapter for either of your stories. Get really excited when I see a new update. Anyways that's all from me, goodnight I'm going to sleep now. Update soon:)

oh my gosh that's really sick. i mean, i know it's adultff.net but isn't it a little extreme? i was wincing and cringing throughout the entire fic because i was feeling so painful for naruto. i hope he gets better soon. orochimaru is really so damn sick. sorry if i sound like a flamer but i'm not. i like your writing, just that, it's a little unconvincing, how abused naruto is. or maybe i'm just naive...

Very, Very good story

i am so loving your fic keep up the great work and i really hope they catch the guys who did that to naruto and they get the shit beat outta them

Your writing is wonderful. I really hope you continue this story, you got me hooked!

Wow. ... I just read your story straight through chapters 1 thru 5... And I am speechless. This is .... *shakes head* Wonderful work. Looking forward to the next update. Ja.

I hate what thoes bastards did to poor Naruto, I hope they die! please update soon, I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope Naruto doesn't get hurt again