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You can not consent to assult,anywhere! Minor or not.Thats why suicide is against the law,you can not leagaly harm or agree for someone else to harm you.Any sexual contact with a minor is statutory rape,the kid doesn't have to prove it hurt!There is no "just" sex with a minor....in real life.No adult can get in the personal space of a minor,18 inches I beleive,a teacher can not touch you,unwanted touching meaning its not to help you from harm,say a trainer spotting you ,is assult,yes,a touch is assult and sexual contact,esp,intercourse/penetration with anything is rape.Kida have rights.They don't have to prove shit also they can't refuse a rape test neither can their guardians,thats obstructing justice and if the hospital lets them go they are responsible. and cullable.In real life and in a perfect situation,we all know class and money have alot to do with how you are treated at a hospital and by the authorities. sighs.
Sasuke is being dence,he must know whats up,come on....he is more concerned with females being flirted with then a raped boy...I am not impressed Sasuke.This fic is gripping and horribly sad.

yes those bastards r goin to pay keep up the really good work an update soon

Wow. I didn't really expect to see a new chapter so soon but I have to say I am happy to see it. Poor Naruto, he's going to be all over the internet now with all kinds of sick freaks watching them do bad stuff to him, that is really going to suck when he finds out about that. And also I don't know much about the law but is it really ok if someone beats you into the giving consent that it really counts as consent. That's retarded. But at least the whole 14 thing helped get around it, did they know he was 14 or did they just assume he was 16. I hope that they didn't know and that they think there all homefree and them bam, their screwed:D Are we going to see Itachi soon, I'm guessing he was involved and that's probably going to make Naruto staying with Sasuke more complicated. Ok well, yea wow. I really loved/hated this chapter. Loved it cause it was good, hated it cause people are all so mean to poor Naruto. I don't see the grammer problems in this story that I saw in Broken. Anyways yea I'm giong to end this review now and just say that I loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next one and yea that's all, update soon:)

Bleck.That was fucking sick.That was also co-ortion,it would not pass as consent.But there you go,also you have to be 18(in Canada,NY state ect.)it ,S/M is illeagel in most states guys,even if its your parents doing it with furry hand cuffs,Welcome to 1984!(the book)!In real life if they hurt someone that bad they would make a snuff movie and finish it.This is a fic however,one I was/am liking.Sasuke is an idiot,he should have got a doctor.Yuk.I read this in the am too.Vengence,I demand vengence.No one should have that done to them!!!!!!!!!!!Its a crime against humanity.

Please tell me Itachi isn't involved in this!!!!!!!!!!(CH 3)If so he must die.

Navy eh?Girl?There are no girls,unless your a queen,in the navy only women,but don't they (higer ups) call men/women (sailor) "girls" to humiliate them?What comes around goes around eh?Hope you are sticking to abusing literary devices.Stay away from Bankok ect.Be a good girl.Well a violent/ pediphile/ using (non concenting)real sex slaves is bad eveything else is good.Hell you are surrounded by buff guys,probably not all that bright but, who cares!Tell us more about your twisted self.

oh my god...
I'm speechless, it's... almost like a documentary... or a crime story script
Damn good
When Aburame said "He consented, it's not a crime" my heart stopped, literally. And that started pounding like mad!
Thanks for the almost immediate relief or I'll die of heart disfunction
And the fact that Sasuke just went to school- it's so like a boy his age and of his family-situation would do! Confused, scared, not used to be ampathic.
Great work, very disturbing... Especially with all the rape porn sites available online

i love your story, it makes me happy, its a good story line and the misery naru lives in is great, he's got a lot of angst and sasu is finding out little by little, not too fast, it's good, lol

Ok, could you just update soon? I really,really wanna know what is going to happned!! You can't leave us like this!!!

I'v always been a fan of your work, they tend to be so cruel but yet so scaringly true *shudder*
I like this story even more then I like 'Broken', which is to say alot!

a lil' pointer tho', It's written Uchiha, not Uchida. You wrote the correct way in the beginning of Broken, but you stopped some where in the middle...why?

and in most places it's called Dial-up instead of modem, but both versions are correct.

Keep on typing and feed the fangirls!