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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write moooore! Please!!! Pretty please with sugar on top!!
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always it's a great chapter ^_^ Thank you for it.
I hope they can help Naruto...
Anyways I can't wait to read more.
I hope they can help Naruto...
Anyways I can't wait to read more.
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*big eyes* more... there will be more chapters, right? right?? omg i love this story it's amazing! *wipes away tears* why do we always torment poor Naruto-chan and why is it always so delightfully angst?! by the way, wonderful Sasuke. PLEASE KEEP IT UP
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i feel really sorry for poor Naruto, personally i would have 'ended it' a while before having to co-exsist with cat sized rats and perverts. I like it so far, another good chapter added to a. so far, good fic. Kudos.
-Oubliette
-Oubliette
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... You got me there...I did not expect Orochimaru working for akatsuki ast rape-videos maker...
I just hope Sasuke will take good, sweet,tender care of Naruto, while we get the picture of what happened that night...
Keep up the great work
P.S. As to MediaMiner - there's something seriously technically wrong with that site, I visited it a few times and tried to leave reviews but never ever succeeding! It just never accepted the code I typed! So maybe that's why there are so few reviews there?
I just hope Sasuke will take good, sweet,tender care of Naruto, while we get the picture of what happened that night...
Keep up the great work
P.S. As to MediaMiner - there's something seriously technically wrong with that site, I visited it a few times and tried to leave reviews but never ever succeeding! It just never accepted the code I typed! So maybe that's why there are so few reviews there?
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ouch... i really wanna know what na-chan went through... please update fast!!!
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good again. Sad you won't update so soon any more. But please continue. So they have chances that Itachi might have something to do with it. You put rape in warning but they are just suggestions (I hope Orochimaru, the snake bastard won't touch little Naruto anymore). If Itachi is involve, what a mess it will be! Hope Sasuke won't die or anything protecting him (but, hey, I think Orochimaru will want a taste of delicious Sasuke brr creepy). You're really are horrible, ya know? But you're good. Broken is not finish so I don't know, but I hope after all they have to endure, you'll make a happy ending .I love your stories where they have so much to endure, pain, rape, abuse, self-loathing, shame, hate etc... but I don't like when all of this is for nothing as they acn never be happy in the end, so please, whatever they live, let them be happy and kill Orochimaru!!! Love ya! Please continue! Ja!
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course the story would be popular, it's really good just like your other story and mediaminer isn't the best site for getting stories out there. Now that you've gotten to as far as I've gotten I'm waiting very Impatiently:D for the next chapter to come out. I really really want to know what's coming next and especially if the other kids at the school are going to get a hold of this website. Again I will say it really sucks to be raped but to have it taped and then put all over the internet for all kinds of people to see really sucks. But at least that way the evidence is there and if they just find who did it they could probably be sent to prison. Also I was wondering since the website is called Akatsuki, is Gaara going to be on the site too since in the series their after him too. Ok that's all, I love it you know. I'm my reviews tend not to give much constructive criticism, if there are any mistakes I really don't notice them cause I'm too busy reading and loving your story anyways that's all again. Great job and please update both stories soon. Don't forget about either one, this is a good story too.
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my sadistic side is absolutely loving this story. update soon, please? ^__^
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! this is so good! Please update sooN!