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for Just another day in paradise

by arora1

person mitsune
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oohhh... what did she see? i have a guess who the guy he was with in the video it was orochimaru wasnt it? i hope not well i hope you post the next chapter soon cause i cant wait for the karma part to kick in, im sasuke-kun will be shocked once he see's the vid, and i guess since its akatsuki itachi-sama is probably a member right? is there a possibility that the guy in the video with naruto is itachi? instead of orochimaru? pls update soon!!!!
person redfox9t
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, at so sad thought. I hope you make Naruto move in with Sasuke it only right. I can't believe that Naruto was raped and put on a porn site. Please make who ever did it burn in hell!!!!!
person Anon
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... a little too OOC for me, and really not a way I like to see Naruto portrayed but still interesting
person silverfox
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well this just keeps getting better and better soesn't it but u already know that since yaour the athur well keep up the good work can't wait ot see what happens next so update soon
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I love this demented story.

Keep up the excellent work, coolsa.

Rats, huh....I rather deal with insects, you can at least get raid and spectricide...lol.
person eyes0nme19
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting...looking forward to the next chapter!!
person tatemshope
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really like this story. If you ever need anyone to Beta I'd be happy to help! I can't wait to see where this goes.
person dreamsraven
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWW...i almost cried when sasuke walked in the bathroom and found naruto like that!!!! this is extemely drepressing...but its sooo good!! i cant wait for the next chapter! please update soon!...poor poor naru-chan! please take care of him sasuke...
person bookworm51485
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!!! I feel so special, I got mentioned in the chapter. Ok this has really made my day. I am happy to see it posted here, I've found this is the best site of the ones I've been to for finding stories updated well. For some reason when I try to go to mediaminer I have to search for Broken and then go through your member profile to find this story, not sure why. Maybe it just hates me. Anyways you already know I love this story and this chapter and your other story and your writing in general so I won't go into detail. Just gonna say that I can't wait til the next new chapter of both your stories:D
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congrats. The second chapter was as good as the first. I am really feeling for poor Naruto. Its a bit of a bummer he isn't awake for Sasuke's caring (sort of) attitude. Anyway i look forward to the next installment.

-Oubliette