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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A most update! This is now one of my favorite fics. I hope you update very soon
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is way exciting and cool.I hope Sasuke continues to protect Naruto in spite of everything he has been taught he must admire Naruto's strength of character.The ongoing assumption in 99% of fan fics that the poor are morally unsound and automaticly inferior disgusts me to no end.I am assuming most of you are sheltered to a very unhealthy degree.Do something about this,considering most of us are female geneticly over 2/3 rds of us will be living in poverty by retirement or earlier if you have kids and depend on a male for support.rant,not based on this fic by any means because this is actually rather realistic,I have only seen rats near my house when I lived by a rail yard so I can't say about that though it sounds right enough with that kind of environment.Love this fic.It meshed very quickly and the writing is sincinct and gobbles attention.Kudos dear writer.Please update soon?
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just dropping by to tell you how I absolutely love your fic.
As always :) And all of them.
But the rat incident is just... Just no more rats ( or any other vermin, for that matter) eating people, please.
Just update asap, ne?
As always :) And all of them.
But the rat incident is just... Just no more rats ( or any other vermin, for that matter) eating people, please.
Just update asap, ne?
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! anotha chapta!!! yeeeeey!!! real cool! i like the writing!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dayum...... that was... wow... and the rats! *shivers* you're good girl. you're really good. definitely wasn't expecting that. i'm so glad that sasuke is taking naruto out of that hell hole. looking foward to your next update.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've read most of your other fanfction, Broken and while that one is very good, I actually like the plot this one a lot more. You're a very good writer and I look forward to reading the next chapter ^_^
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I love you! I love the protective Sasuke especially when he's fighting with himself to stay a cold heartless bastard! Please continue and kill Orochimaru!!! Thanks! Good luck! Ja!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy shit thats was a very mean chapter i almost cried reading it but it was nicely done so keep up the freat work how many chapters is this story going to have? update soon can't wait to read wat happens next ^.^
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love your story, please continue!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I saw a few grammar errors, but overall, a nice story. I was just wondering if Naruto was raped? If so, could you please put a warning either at the beginning of your second chapter, or in the summary, for those of us who don't want to read about that?