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for Just another day in paradise

by arora1

person tsuki
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!!! I hope you update this soon!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Im loving this story!
person kitty-chan
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your style! update soon!
person chi no hana
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. na-chan really has a tough life. i hate you for that. but somehow i can't help but wanna no what happens. you're just that good, heh.
person Missa
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not a happy fic, is it. Ah, I can't admit that I love it, when Naruto is suffering, and attracting perverted geezers...Oro? But I do love the story, sorry Naru. I like how cold Sasuke is, how Naru acts independant, and Oro is after Naruto. I don't like Orochimaru lusting after Sasuke... but Naruto's ok~! Weird, ne?
person bookworm51485
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if you were going to post this story on this site. You already know that I love this story so I really don't need to tell you, just waiting for the next new chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next, sooooo update soon please. Either here or on mediaminer. Good job:)
person Shannigan
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Orochimaru..? O_o Naru-chan! You poor, poor boy! *shudders at thought of Oro's long tongue*