rate_review Reviews

This is intense. I really like this story. Have someone check your grammer.

I like where the story is going. Nice job.

Pretty much all I want to do is applaud your ability to master the characters psychology. I've read many fics involving rape that go so far of base and yet you did a great job of showing their interanal struggles through exernal examples. This was both heart breaking and wonderful. I'm especially happy that you had Sasuke living in the orphange instead of having him magically emancipated. I would love to see the sequel but I honestly have a hard time imagining one since you have the perfect ending. There are so many great things that you did with this story that I could go on and on, but I'll leave it at a simple two thumbs up.

OMG... that was the BEST story I ever read. And I read over a 1,000 of them.... It's actually 2:25 am and I just realised it. That story was wonderful thought I would have prefered Sasuke to be in charge in the end but well... it's okay since ... I don't know how to explain it but... this is like sort of a REAL sasunaru and narusasu story that you can't say, hey naruto should be in charge or whatever. Your talent is completely amazing. Please make a sequel and if you could... make Sasuke in charge. Thank you for this beautiful story.
Gonrie

some of your stories dont end correctly.They dont finish the ending but other wise...I LOVE THE STORY

wai!!!! that ending was SOOOO good...itachis letter to sasuke made me cry! ;_; i really liked this fic...maybe write a sequel...? ::winks::

so it's complete, eh?

Wow. Ir eally really liked it. You blended all of the themes so well together. >.< And I like how you thought Itachi was the bad guy, yet he turned out to be the...good...badguy? XD ^-^

Anyway. Great job! Kudos!

at least u didn't forget about gaara.

OMG! You had me so worried that this was not going to have a happy ending, but thank god you did cause i might have had to kill you :P please make a sequel but please please please don't let poor sasuke be abused more :s i think they've had enough maybe naruto and sasuke should go visit itachi b4 he passes :'( But as long as there's some consenueal sasu/naru smut and hopefully soome naru-uke/sasu-seme *whimper* please please please anywho please make a sequel but if not great job with this story you know its good when it makes me stay up till 2am(while feeling sick i might add) just to get as far in the story as possible :P thanks so much for making it a happy ending i can actually become physically ill if i get too worked up with sadness from really angst and sad character death stories :( and please continue 'broken' asap its very well written as well, remember happy ending :P great work hope to read more of ur work soon :P

ps hehe i don't know why ppl must be either seme or uke? BE BOTH! its much more fun and gives you more options ;)