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for Just another day in paradise

by arora1

person Lalala
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How about a sequel where Sasuke and Naruto are trying to get used to having a normal life again, with school and whatnot.
person Anon
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why, yes, you answered all the questions. Very good indead.
I've just one negative point (just one in all your story!): you made Sasuke being a bottom, and I can't accept this, not after all of this, not only I'm a SasuNaru fan (meaning Sasuke don't bottom), but in this story, it's Sasuke who protects Naruto, everything in it put it this way, even if Naruto is strong and Sasuke very human.
So, as I love your story and I still think it's a very good piece of crap, I'll close my eyes on this little fact and forget that was the way you saw it. Cause I personally refer to the sumary and when you write Sasu/Naru I do believe it won't be otherwise.
Now I hope you won't do the smae thing with'broken' or I might get very disapointed. I know, it's just a detail in all of your story, and you did explain your point well as for why Sasuke is like that, but I still think it's important.
Anyway! Itachi is going to die! That's so sad! Good thing Jiraiya and Tsunade are getting married and will adopt Naruto, good for him, he deserve it.
Love ya! And please, come back on the Sasuke=top side! Good luck! Ja ne!
ps: in french, we don't say 'le fin' but 'la fin'!
person RyuichiSakuma2
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loooooved it. Lovelovelove.
person monchy
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow great ending, even with the tragic start, the plot was great. One of my favorite stories. hihihi
person losthimagain
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want a sequal because this is the most kick ass story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDD Thank you soooooooooooooooo much and I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD ^^ You're the best and I look forwared to more ^^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster
person courtney
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was an amzing fic, I can't even put into words how well you wrote this, I would pleeease advise you to make a sequel..... I'll die without your writitng....
person Mochi~
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.............guh.. .gfg...fg.as....gh....

*is not able to form real words*

I love you.
person masako2685
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MAN!!! i really liked this story and the ending was great and they all lived happily ever after...or so the saying goes. soooo i am all for a sequel...i don't know about anyone else but i want to see how there life keeps going.
person -anonymous-
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Well, I'll try not to make this too long ^^ First of all, I loved this fanfic! It's very beautiful and... you really got the feelings right! Take it from someone who knows, even if my story wasn't at all this extreme. While I was still -untouched-, this story would probably been moving, but now... it was overwhelming! I couldn't really read through the abuse-parts properly, but I did my best, and how stupid it may sound... despite it being fiction, reading stories like this kind of makes me feel more hopeful about moving on. ^^ So thanx a lot and keep up your work. You're very skillful and I'm looking forward to see more from you! ^^v
person YellingAndScreaming
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG this story is amazing! I have to know more!