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for Just another day in paradise

by arora1

person Zusume
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes. You have one of the best Naruto stories of all at this site. Though things are going slow between Sasuke and Naruto, it doesn't matter that much. I really love your story and now they're finally out iof the hospital and rescued and I need to know what happems next. Please update as soon as you can, I'm sure everyone's waiting for the next chapter.
person Quiky
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOw

thing get excited

I can't wait to see what will happen

please please please hurry up and get the new chapter

Thank you sooooooo much for the story
person Tina
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
T.T...
EVIL CLIFFHANGER
AWESOME TWIST
PLEEASE UPDATED SOON
person Akuma Sora
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite story out of all the ones I have read on aff.net. I cant wait till you get the next chappie up. This story is very,very good.
person worsel
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Plot twist! *Dramatic Music* I absolutely love this story, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to know what happens. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
person uchiha_serina
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I've been following this story. What a surprise this latest chapter was. Is this the end of the story or is there followup to it?
person macy
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You totally got met there!!!! It was Daddy Uchiha?!??!!? Whoa!!! But that makes total sense actually. It'll explain Itachi's actions a looot. Woooo!!! That was soooo good! I'm all hyped up to read more. There were a few spelling mistakes but I easily forgot them because of the turn of events. The character death warning in the beginning scared me, but i'm glad that I decided to read it!
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I knew Itachi had to have a reason to murder 'em all! Now I'm happy I never lost faith in 'im!
person Kori Nibiki
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And the bomb has been dropped. Oh! I wanted to scream out at that! GREAT Chapter. Can't wait for the next. So keep up the writing. Ja!
person redfox9t
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that was just.... wow! Please update but no more rape, its making me so sick and I feel so bad. I hope your bring Gaara in the story, it would help make a good ending.